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First article

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Hello,

I have finished my first article. Why it is still not live on Wikipédia? Please help.

Thank you very much,

All the Best,

TCG2017TCG2017 (talk) 06:58, 11 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

It's an Articles for Creation (AfC) submission, which means it won't be moved to mainspace until it passes review. To get it through review you'll have to add more sources. The organization websites are fine to prove she works for that group, but you will need a few more sources to prove notability, which is what the reviewer tagged it as needing. For somebody like this, who is involved in the FEI, you should be able to find some horse magazine articles about her. Newspapers also often cover the horse shows or competitions that are held in their towns. White Arabian Filly Neigh 15:07, 11 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Eleonora Ottaviani Moroni (October 11)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by David.moreno72 was:
This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
David.moreno72 13:34, 11 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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Hello! TCG2017, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! David.moreno72 13:34, 11 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
TCG2017 (talk) 10:07, 27 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello,

I have amende the article according your comments. Please let me know if the article is not approved.

Thank you very much for your great help.

Your submission at Articles for creation: International Jumping Riders Club (October 29)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Dlohcierekim was:
This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
Please see WP:promo. I see no change since the last decline, except that I removed the mission statement. There needs to be verifiable information from WP:reliable sources unconnected with the subject who treat the subject in depth.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Dlohcierekim (talk) 08:39, 29 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Eleonora Ottaviani Moroni (November 28)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by 1997kB was:
This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
#1997kB 18:57, 28 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

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TCG2017 (talk) 10:16, 20 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello,

I have made changes in the article on the IJRC and re-written the text. I also added links to prove the notariability of the Internation Jumping Riders Club.

Please let me know if the article is now approved.

Thank you for your great help,

Looking forward to reading you.

All the best

Your submission at Articles for creation: International Jumping Riders Club (December 20)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:
This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
The references are mostly passing mentions and some don't even mention the International Jumping Riders Club?
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Theroadislong (talk) 11:05, 20 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Eleonora Ottaviani Moroni (January 14)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MadeYourReadThis was:
This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
MadeYourReadThis (talk) 06:45, 14 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: International Jumping Riders Club (March 26)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Matthew hk was:
This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the general guideline on notability, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
Same reason as Theroadislong. The citation were routine coverage of the subject.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Matthew_hk tc 10:52, 26 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: International Jumping Riders Club (May 23)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bradv was:
This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
This article needs to be reduced to only that which can be supported by third-party reliable sources.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Bradv 15:15, 23 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Eleonora Ottaviani Moroni (May 24)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bradv was:
This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Bradv 00:23, 24 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: International Jumping Riders Club (June 15)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MadeYourReadThis was:
This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the general guideline on notability, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
MadeYourReadThis (talk) 11:08, 15 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Eleonora Ottaviani Moroni (June 15)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TYelliot was:
This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
Does not meet WP:NEQUESTRIAN guidelines, which requires participation as ride or official team coach in FEI major events.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
TYelliot | Talk | Contribs 13:29, 15 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Eleonora Ottaviani Moroni (June 15)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Waggie were:
This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.
This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
Press releases and interviews aren't useful in establishing notability. We are looking for journalistic coverage that is independent of the subject. Press releases and interviews are the subject (and her affiliates) talking about themselves, which is not independent coverage. In addition, too much of the content is completely unsourced, and will need to be removed.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Waggie (talk) 17:00, 15 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

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TCG2017 (talk) 15:21, 17 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The article has been modified and reduced. The references have been updated.

Your submission at Articles for creation

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
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TCG2017 (talk) 13:33, 18 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello,

My article on Eleonora Ottaviani Moroni was declined and on the wiki help channel, we advice me to contact you regarding the criteria in WP:NEQUESTRIAN and Eleonora Ottaviani Moroni's notability in equestrian.

Indeed, the notability may be presume for persons / individuals who made major contributions to the equestrian industry. I think that Eleonora Ottaviani Moroni does suit these criteria. She has been associated with equestrian competition at international level competition as Event Director for the European Championships and the CSI 5* Jumping in Valencia. Those events are sanctioned/approved by the FEI which is the governing body of equestrian sports.

Since 1997, she has been involved with the International Jumping Riders Club (IJRC), of which she is currently Executive Director. The IJRC is an organization that represents equestrian international riders and has signed a memorundum of understanding with the FEI.

In 2009, she was judge at the FEI Award. She is also involved in the Equestrian European Federation (EEF) as Athletes’ Representative. And finally she is President of a non-profit association for young talented equestrian riders, the Riders Academy which is sponsored by Rolex. She dedicates her life to equestrian sports and riders and contributes through her engagement that the athletes’ voices are heard and make sure that fair play and the horses’ welfare are the priority in equestrian sports.

Therefore, she does play a major contributions to the equestrian industry.

Thank you for your return and looking forward to hearing from you.

Your submission at Articles for creation: International Jumping Riders Club (August 6)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Catrìona were:
This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.
This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
Much of the content in this article is still not backed up to reliable sources. In addition, citing the organization's own website does not establish that it is notable.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Catrìona (talk) 13:17, 6 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Eleonora Ottaviani Moroni (August 7)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by SportingFlyer were:
This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.
This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
SportingFlyer talk 05:42, 7 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Eleonora Ottaviani Moroni (August 20)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by David.moreno72 were:
This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
Per previous comments.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
David.moreno72 13:53, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:International Jumping Riders Club

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Hello, TCG2017. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, Draft:International Jumping Riders Club.

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it. — JJMC89 (T·C) 07:11, 7 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Eleonora Ottaviani Moroni

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Hello, TCG2017. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Eleonora Ottaviani Moroni".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 94rain Talk 13:06, 14 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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