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The Russian magazine source cited in support of Coldplay being equivalent to a 21-century Beatles does not make that claim. I have inserted a "cn" tag 13:01, 15 May 2025 (UTC) Billsmith60 (talk) 13:01, 15 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Google tranlsate does not support the translation in the "archived" version. Please investigate, thanks Billsmith60 (talk) 22:30, 15 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, I recommend scrolling down the entire article so the translation can be complete, then search for the word "Beatles". You will find the full paragraph on the second mention of their name. In any case, the source has been archived again, I hope it helps. GustavoCza (talkcontribs) 04:16, 16 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'll take your word on this, although I found only one occurrence of the string 'beatles' when using GT. Frustratingly, GT has a 1,500-character limit, so I had to check it by cutting and pasting para. after para. Billsmith60 (talk) 12:06, 16 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Is the CEO event going to be added to this page?

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https://www.forbes.com/sites/monicamercuri/2025/07/19/astronomer-ceo-placed-on-leave-amid-viral-coldplay-concert-scandal/ Tarushv (talk) 14:06, 23 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

It was added to Impact of the Music of the Spheres World Tour already. I don't think it belongs here when there are more important things to cover about their 28 years in the music industry. GustavoCza (talkcontribs) 14:24, 23 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Overall copy-editing needed

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There are some odd grammar choices, omitted words, etc. I'm just passing through (13 Aug 2025) and don't have time to tidy up now; perhaps some kind soul would take it on. Thank you. Cwilsyn (talk) 07:06, 13 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Albums not Records

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


I am asking for respect for the terminology used in the Thelegraph article where the editor uses the word "albums" and not "records" to describe Coldplay's album sales. I would find it very unserious and lacking in bias to disrespect what is written in the article and to edit the Wikipedia page to suit some interpretations. The post says: Coldplay sold over 160 million albums, it doesn't say records. I'm only asking for what is fair, let's not fall into speculation by assuming they are records, because so far only the sales of Coldplay albums have been revealed, not the records. Hilario21 (talk) 04:28, 12 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Hilario21:
  • About the source wording: The Telegraph does use "albums" for the 160M figure. However, other mainstream coverage uses “records” (i.e., albums + singles) for ~160M. In other words, sources conflict on the term. Per WP:V/WP:RS/WP:CONTEXTMATTERS, we shouldn’t state "albums" in Wikipedia’s voice unless that wording is consistently reflected in high-quality sources, not just one article.
  • Let’s avoid edit warring: Please pause bold changes while we sort this out here per WP:BRD and work toward WP:CONSENSUS. Repeated reverts over a wording dispute fall under WP:EW.
  • On tone and conduct: Personal remarks like "Are you blind…", "You should be blocked," etc., aren't OK per WP:CIVIL and WP:NPA. Content disputes are normal; personal attacks aren't. Let's please keep it focused on sources and policy.
I'm staying out of of the edit war but just wanted to drop in a few quick thoughts here. Veggiegalaxy (talk) 13:44, 12 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]
A while ago, several administrators and editors on Wikipedia told me that what is written in the article is noted, now it turns out that they edit according to their interpretation of the article, I don't think what they are doing is serious. Hilario21 (talk) 14:08, 12 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]
A while ago, several administrators and editors on Wikipedia told me that what is written in the article is noted, now it turns out that they edit according to their interpretation of the article, I don't think what they are doing is correct * I was wrong in the message above Hilario21 (talk) 14:10, 12 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Wikipedia resorts to pure sales (physical and digital copies) when ranking the best-selling acts of all time. 160 million across albums and singles is perfectly realistic for Coldplay under that logic. With streaming they are well past 300 million. GustavoCza (talkcontribs) 17:25, 12 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Well, I still think that the term albums should be respected since the editor of Thelegraph uses the term album and not records, since being a very credible medium, it makes the editor know what he is writing and makes reference to sales only of Coldplay albums. Hilario21 (talk) 18:08, 12 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]
As you say, Coldplay has sold more than 300 million records. There are even sites that claim it's more than 400 million. Putting the information that Coldplay sold 160 million records is inaccurate and wrong.only misinforms. Hilario21 (talk) 18:17, 12 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Our colleagues working to maintain the page List of best-selling music artists have determined that the 160 million number is low. They estimate that 166.7 million albums and singles have been sold. All of the sales figures in this range are combined albums and singles. The Telegraph piece was wrong—see WP:CONTEXTMATTERS. We don't simply accept wrong facts just because they appear in an otherwise reliable source. Common sense is used, and we compare other sources to determine the truth. Binksternet (talk) 04:16, 15 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I ask that you not interpret the information, since the rules prohibit the interpretation of sources. Are you saying you have more knowledge than what I edit in The Telegraph? From the beginning of Wikipedia, information was posted as it was written in the source Maxwellxy (talk) 20:47, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
and the use of interpretation was prohibited, if so they would not be biased Wikipedia:No original research
Wikipedia:Verifiability Maxwellxy (talk) 20:48, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Sources can also be wrong. If I quoted every piece of information I ever read in any news/magazine article for the purposes of adding to Wikipedia, it would be a mess. Referencing requires a discerning eye sometimes when sources conflict. Y2Kcrazyjoker4 (talkcontributions) 21:47, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
In this case, this new information should not be published, since it is not clear. In any case, the rules are the rules, and reading the word "records" on the Wikipedia page and then going to the source and reading "albums" is inconsistent. Maxwellxy (talk) 00:14, 9 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I understand the point, but in this case we would be leaving it up to everyone to interpret the information. Maxwellxy (talk) 00:16, 9 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I agree - if we don't think the source is giving an accurate number AND label, then we should find a different reference instead of simply using a different label in the Wikipedia article. Y2Kcrazyjoker4 (talkcontributions) 05:34, 9 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I think the same Maxwellxy (talk) 04:15, 10 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It's either that or reproduce the information as it is in the source and not "interpret" the information, since the source was approved for a reason and if the source was approved it must be written as the source of information is written. Maxwellxy (talk) 05:08, 10 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I was also reading the discussions above, and it seems to me that several editors are making use of "interpretation", which seems to me to be a very bad use of Wikipedia. Maxwellxy (talk) 05:10, 10 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
since you cannot approve a source of information and publish it and then change what the source says and interpret what it meant, that is not correct, either you approve something and write it as is or you do not upload it and that's it until you have better data Maxwellxy (talk) 05:17, 10 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
WP:CONTEXTMATTERS is clear that a nonsense "fact" cannot be accepted on its face even though the source is usually reliable. Our colleagues working the trenches over at List of best-selling music artists have to deal with this all the time. They have determined that 160M is the claimed number of total units sold. Not just albums. Binksternet (talk) 05:35, 10 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
And where do your "colleagues" get that figure from? Parlaphone only released the sales figures for Coldplay's albums. [1] Maxwellxy (talk) 12:48, 10 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Parlophone, as Coldplay's record label, is not an independent source, as record labels are often known for inflating sales figures for promotional purposes. TheWikiholic (talk) 14:19, 13 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Haha, what are you talking about? That post I'm talking about was on Coldplay's main Wikipedia page for a long time. William2do (talk) 14:56, 15 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

information Administrator note I've blocked the obvious sock puppet accounts in this discussion. Paul Erik (talk)(contribs) 02:57, 16 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Unexplained reverts

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I did some minor editing of the lead to fix the overlinking of London per MOS:CAPS and remove some redundant elements. These changes have been removed for mysterious reasons. Can we address this? Popcornfud (talk) 21:15, 5 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Popcornfud, GustavoCza thinks that they WP:OWN this article and any others related to Coldplay... it's been a long-running issue; there was nothing wrong with the changes that you made. 4TheWynne (talk contribs) 05:08, 6 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
GustavoCza, do you want to comment? Popcornfud (talk) 13:29, 6 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Given they decided to revert yet again after the most recent comment (now five in 24 hours) and this is part of a long pattern of behaviour, I've reported them to WP:ANI. 4TheWynne (talk contribs) 16:01, 6 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Phil Harvey

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The "also credited as a full member" bit that was added is already covered on the note. — GustavoCza (talk · edits) 18:32, 7 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

TBH ... I will need to do some thinking about this. I'm inclined to keep the copy addition because I think that, for an average or new Coldplay fan, they will likely 1) not read the note and 2) benefit from the knowledge about Phil's role in the band. I don't see, I guess, why we can't just cite that claim instead of including it as a note, or even better, keep the note and the copy?
I'm open to thoughts here, and if there is policy I'm missing, I'm all ears. Veggiegalaxy (talk) 22:41, 7 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, this is better explained in the prose rather than the note. If it's important to explain, leave it out of the note. If it isn't not important, leave it out of the article. We can explain when he was first credited as a band member and the history in detail in the article body. Popcornfud (talk) 22:52, 7 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Here's a proposal:
Coldplay are a British rock band formed in London in 1997. They consist of vocalist and pianist Chris Martin, guitarist Jonny Buckland bassist Guy Berryman and drummer Will Champion. Manager Phil Harvey is credited as their fifth member on album notes as well.[1] Best known for their live performances,[2] they have had a significant impact on popular culture.
"and drummer and percussionist" reads very awkwardly. — GustavoCza (talk · edits) 00:10, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
the drummer and percussionist bit is a separate issue, i think. i think the current semicolon in the article reads more cleanly and has the same effect as your revision. semicolons separate independent clauses that are closely related in thought just like your period in your example does. Veggiegalaxy (talk) 00:22, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Maybe it's a Brazilian Portuguese thing but I'm not a huge fan of semicolon unless it's for lists.
Coldplay are a British rock band formed in London in 1997. They consist of vocalist and pianist Chris Martin; guitarist Jonny Buckland; bassist Guy Berryman; drummer and percussionist Will Champion; and manager Phil Harvey, who is recognised as their fifth member on album notes.[1] Known for their live performances,[2] they have had a significant cultural impact.
GustavoCza (talk · edits) 00:42, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah that's fair.
Ok, so (sorry not trying to pick on you) I think that would be an incorrect use of semicolons.
What about just commas, a period, (so it would be "Chris, Jonny, Guy, and Will." and then "Their manager, Phil Harvey, is recognized as a fifth member of the band" Veggiegalaxy (talk) 00:48, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I really wanted to keep the percussion for Will without making it awkward. Also, I feel like the first paragraph of the article should be as tight as possible. How about this?
Coldplay are a British rock band formed in London in 1997. They consist of vocalist and pianist Chris Martin, guitarist Jonny Buckland, bassist Guy Berryman, drummer and percussionist Will Champion, and manager Phil Harvey, who is recognised as their fifth member on album notes.[1] Known for their live performances,[2] they have had a significant cultural impact.
GustavoCza (talk · edits) 00:54, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
We can omit "on album notes". He's either a member of the band or he isn't, it doesn't matter where he's credited. They're all credited in album notes so why is he special?
Alternatively, if the "on album notes" phrasing is trying to alleviate some potential confusion about a manager being a member, I would be more explicit and write something like "The manager Phil Harvey has been credited as a member since XXXX" (whenever the year was).
Regarding the "drummer and percussionist" thing - drums are a kind of percussion so just "drummer" is fine. We should be using broad language in the lead. Popcornfud (talk) 01:01, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I agree that we can omit album notes. We can also just say "is generally recognized as a fifth member"; not only is he recognized on album notes but he is known by fans and the band as such. If anyone is concerned about that I'm sure we could find sources to support.
at the risk of prolonging this debate even further, I would personally keep percussionist, because Will plays a variety of percussion instruments on stage and in recording. But I will respect the consensus Veggiegalaxy (talk) 01:03, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
(whoops, autocorrected from recognised) Veggiegalaxy (talk) 01:04, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
All of them are multi-instrumentalists but Will has been the most consistent/versatile in that regard, which is why I wanted to keep "percussionist" as well. How about this?
Coldplay are a British rock band formed in London in 1997. They consist of vocalist and pianist Chris Martin, guitarist Jonny Buckland, bassist Guy Berryman, drummer and percussionist Will Champion, and manager Phil Harvey, who is recognised as their fifth member.[1] Known for their live performances,[2] they have had a significant impact on popular culture.
GustavoCza (talk · edits) 01:11, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
works for me! Veggiegalaxy (talk) 01:23, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Difference between drummer and percussionist isn't meaningful enough to note. Drums are a kind of percussion.
"recognized as a fifth member" is fuzzy wording and needlessly ambiguous - he either is a member or he isn't. we don't write that Guy Berryman is also "recognized as a member", he's just a member. What problem is this wording trying to fix? Popcornfud (talk) 01:37, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Well, the previous version had no ambiguity, answering possible doubts with a note. — GustavoCza (talk · edits) 01:39, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I actually think that wording works because it's atypical for a manager to be described as a band member. PositivelyUncertain (talk) 02:47, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with the maintaining the current wording of manager Phil Harvey is also credited as a full member and expanding upon this in the prose rather than the note, and that just "drummer" is fine. 4TheWynne (talk contribs) 03:54, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I removed the forward slash per MOS:ANDOR. Regarding the album notes part: I added it because I was watching Everyday Life – Live in Jordan again and noticed that Harvey is credited separately as an executive producer. The same goes for Music of the Spheres: Live at River Plate, where his name is on a "Managers" table alongside Mandi Frost and Arlene Moon. — GustavoCza (talk · edits) 10:51, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
He's credited as a full member, so I don't see the need to mention album notes; the article also never mentioned Harvey's departure or return to the band, so rather than leave it as a note, I've added both to the prose, and his mention in the lead therefore doesn't need to be expanded upon further than credited as a full member. 4TheWynne (talk contribs) 12:07, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"He has since been credited as a full member of the band" is technically wrong on the X&Y section. A Rush of Blood to the Head already listed him as a full member on the album notes. GustavoCza (talk · edits) 12:10, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That wording doesn't make it wrong, though. 4TheWynne (talk contribs) 12:18, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Still a bit misleading. GustavoCza (talk · edits) 12:27, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It isn't, though, as it doesn't state or even suggest that he wasn't credited as a full member previously – that's just what you read into it; that said, being given greater prominence on the Rush liner notes isn't the same as the band saying that it considered him a full member, and you wouldn't be able to use it as a source/you'd need a more reliable one to prove that the band credited him as a member in/before 2002. 4TheWynne (talk contribs) 12:48, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ "Non-Performing Band Members: From Coldplay to The Grateful Dead". Tedium. 28 June 2018. Archived from the original on 15 September 2023. Retrieved 15 September 2023.
  2. ^ "Coldplay's 10 Best Songs". Consequence. 13 October 2021. Archived from the original on 24 October 2021. Retrieved 11 January 2022.

Typo

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The "would be released on 15 October 202, and scheduled the closing track" part is missing a number. — GustavoCza (talk · edits) 22:23, 7 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Addressed, thanks! Veggiegalaxy (talk) 22:35, 7 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Could you weight in on the topic above too? Thanks. — GustavoCza (talk · edits) 22:36, 7 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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There are several issues with the lead I would like to discuss at the moment:

  • "Percussion": As previously stated, it is fair to highlight the fact Will is a percussionist. He is not limited to drums and plays other instruments on stage.
  • "Parentheses": Using the parentheses format avoid having something clunky like "bassist Guy Berryman, and drummer and percussionist Will".
  • "The band initially went by the names Big Fat Noises and Starfish": Their alma mater has always been mentioned as part of their narrative and should be put back.
  • "The band": This could easily be replaced by "They" to avoid repetition with "the group" on the previous paragraph.
  • "They signed": Change to "the band" as consequence of the above.
  • "The albums ... drew from": If "repertoire" was not good, it could have been changed to "Coldplay expanded their sound". That statement made things more explicit.
  • "Coldplay: A Head Full of Dreams": The term "career-spanning documentary" was previously used to avoid repetition.
  • "second-highest-grossing": Being the first tour by a group to gross $1 billion is more notable and concise.

Further commentary

  • The third and fourth paragraphs were originally separated between talking about Coldplay's projects and achievements, merging them is unnecessarily confusing.
  • The previous lead emphasised the band have two of the highest-grossing and most-attended tours in history, the current one undermines their achievements.
  • Leads usually cite most of the notable singles from an artist, there must be more than just "Yellow", "Viva la Vida" and "My Universe".
  • On the controversial side, I feel like "Something Just Like This" should not be included.

Pinging @4TheWynne, Popcornfud, and Veggiegalaxy for this. Thank you. GustavoCza (talkcontribs) 17:17, 31 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I don't really agree with most or all of these changes, particularly the first three – listing percussion just isn't necessary and can be simplified to drummer, that would be an equally unnecesssary/improper use of parentheses, and given it already mentions that the band formed in London, I feel like that's sufficient enough/pretty standard for the lead, and adding the alma mater (which I suspect might be more of a personal preference than "it's always been part of their narrative") would essentially be repeating that information. 4TheWynne (talk contribs) 22:38, 31 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Simplifying Will to just "drummer" is a problem though, his bandmates always highlighted him as more than that. Regarding the inclusion of UCL, it's not my "personal preference", it has been on the lead since the Coldplay article was created back in September 2002. GustavoCza (talkcontribs) 14:22, 1 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]
First, "It's been here for a long time" isn't a good argument. See WP:BEENHERE.
Second, it's normal for band members to play different instruments and fill different roles. For the lead we just want to summarize their main roles. Sources mainly describe him as a drummer.
Third, drums are percussion instruments. All drummers are percussionists. Writing "drummer and percussionist" would be like writing "drummer and musician". It doesn't add information. Popcornfud (talk) 15:10, 1 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"First, 'It's been here for a long time' isn't a good argument". Well, I think we can both agree it's been there for a reason, no? Chris, Guy, Jonny and Will didn't appeared out of thin air in London; they met at university, became friends and then formed a band. This is something highlighted in profiles written by their agents, opinion articles, show reviews and numerous other sources. Also, it's not like this was removed because the lead is too big or something. That section is supposed to cover the basics and this is one of them when it comes to Coldplay. GustavoCza (talkcontribs) 15:43, 1 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]
On a rather unrelated note, since I know WP:OTHER is a thing, it's kind of hilarious to think that information seems to be worthy of inclusion on Wikipedias all over the world, but we have to remove it from the English one because two users don't like it. GustavoCza (talkcontribs) 15:53, 1 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That's exactly why it was removed, because the section was too long and needed trimming. I don't see how a group of people meeting at university, becoming friends and then forming a band (even if simplified to where they met/studied) is leadworthy for any band; James responding to Lars' newspaper ad and forming a band is potentially an even more famous example, but is this mentioned in that article's lead? No. 4TheWynne (talk contribs) 16:00, 1 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The section is not long at all. And reading the Metallica lead, it seems that information on their origins was not included because editors needed room to address line-up changes, something that doesn't apply for Coldplay. GustavoCza (talkcontribs) 16:09, 1 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Not important for a summary of the most important elements of the article subject. Popcornfud (talk) 16:15, 1 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah, mate, it's pretty long. As for Metallica, you're failing to grasp the point: that information isn't in the lead because it simply isn't leadworthy... that sort of detail is for the history section, same goes for here. 4TheWynne (talk contribs) 16:24, 1 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It's quite literally shorter than the example you brought. Either way, if length is such an issue, why was the sentence that contemplated both the Head Full of Dreams and Music of the Spheres tours erased in favor of a longer one that only cites the latter? GustavoCza (talkcontribs) 19:26, 1 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]
And how do we gauge that objectively? Because several sources mention it as part of their basic profile. GustavoCza (talkcontribs) 19:21, 1 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Apologies that I've not yet weighed in here, I was on a trip and appreciate the tag. I do agree that UCL is unnecessary for the lead for the above reasons. the band has a great origin story and history but if you are trying to understand Coldplay at a high level we don't need that context.
I've been on your side, Gustavo, about the inclusion of percussionist because Will does so much for the band. But @Popcornfud makes a good point that writing "drummer and percussionist" would be a bit like writing "drummer and musician".
Veggiegalaxy (talk) 17:21, 2 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I feel like it wouldn't be as redundant if his role was listed as "(drums and percussion)" like Larry Mullen Jr. in the U2 article. That separation would make it clearer that he does things outside the traditional drum kit. GustavoCza (talkcontribs) 17:40, 2 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It's not important. Popcornfud (talk) 17:49, 2 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Pinging @4TheWynne, @Popcornfud and @Veggiegalaxy again because I think we still need to discuss the other points. I'm disappointed that Will was reduced to simply a drummer but the third and fourth paragraphs being merged for no reason is more annoying. I don't expect any of you to answer right now though. Happy holidays and let us talk about this after New Year's Eve. GustavoCza (talkcontribs) 21:59, 24 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@GustavoCza Would it be terrible to just have him listed as "percussionist"? It acknowledges the band's broad soundscape. DiamondIIIXX (talk) 00:03, 26 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I think "drummer" is too well-established to change, hence why "percussionist" should be additional. GustavoCza (talkcontribs) 02:05, 26 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]
GustavoCza, probably stop flogging the proverbial dead horse on the drummer issue; the format doesn't need to change (including adding parentheses – just because you might see it elsewhere every once in a blue moon, doesn't make it right). Same goes for the university – not necessary for the lead. 4TheWynne (talk contribs) 14:44, 28 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I didn't pinged you again to be rude for the billionth time, I did it because "we still need to discuss the other points", most notably "third and fourth paragraphs" of the lead. You've been on Wikipedia for more than 10 years, so I assume you know something about writing, such as paragraphs being used to organize the text. Weeks ago, the third paragraph addressed Coldplay's post-Viva albums and side-projects, while the fourth talked about their achievements. Right now, it goes from talking about the albums to randomly mentioning "My Universe" and the Music of the Spheres World Tour, then citing philanthropic activities, only for the fourth paragraph to handle stats once again. Long story short, the text went from cohesive to... Well... Not cohesive. I'm asking you to use your review skills here, the discussion is no longer about the first paragraph. GustavoCza (talkcontribs) 18:14, 28 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Aside from the philanthropy, which I've moved to the bottom as it's more of a career-spanning activity, the third paragraph (including "My Universe", the tour and the Time ranking) does still cover Coldplay's post-Viva activities, so it's not random; the fourth paragraph covers more of the the band's career as a whole, only mentioning specific projects with the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame additions, so it's still pretty easy to distinguish between the two paragraphs. We don't necessarily have to keep all statistics and achievements in the one paragraph, and the fourth paragraph was double the size of the third at the time. 4TheWynne (talk contribs) 02:55, 29 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The Rock and Roll Hall of Fame additions are not projects by the band, they're part of their achievements. If the size was an issue you could have removed them instead of this weird mish-mash we have right now. GustavoCza (talkcontribs) 05:28, 29 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]
To clarify, the sentence with the Hall of Fame exhibit additions was the only one to mention specific projects (never said the additions were projects), and no, removing the sentence wouldn't have solved the issue, as its inclusion is more than warranted. I don't understand how you can still say that the section's a mish-mash – the first paragraph introduces the band, second is the first half of the career, third is the second half and the fourth covers career-spanning achievements; there's a clear structure, and just because you might have worded it differently, doesn't make the current version incohesive. 4TheWynne (talk contribs) 10:02, 29 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"My Universe" and the Music of the Spheres World Tour are two different things, it doesn't make sense for them to be on the same sentence right now. The lead is also missing the Head Full of Dreams Tour. GustavoCza (talkcontribs) 17:38, 29 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I mean, it does, as both relate to the Music of the Spheres album, so I reworded the sentence to make it more explicit. The A Head Full of Dreams tour is currently the 14th-most-attended and 16th-highest-grossing tour... it doesn't need to be in the lead. 4TheWynne (talk contribs) 04:44, 31 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]
With the latest revisions, the lead looks in a good place to me! Happy New Year everyone! Veggiegalaxy (talk) 14:44, 2 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]