User talk:Laraoshea7

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Happy editing! CNMall41 (talk) 01:10, 20 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Interest convergence (April 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by I dream of horses were:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

This submission provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject matter. Please see the guide to writing better articles for information on how to better format your submission.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Would need a significant rewrite before being moved to mainspace.

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I dream of horses ^{(Contribs) (Talk)} 01:33, 20 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Laraoshea7! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! I dream of horses ^{(Contribs) (Talk)} 01:33, 20 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Interest convergence has been accepted

Interest convergence, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as B-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. This is a fantastic rating for a new article, and places it among the top 3% of accepted submissions — major kudos to you! You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Carpimaps ^{talk to me!} 11:34, 23 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Good job! However, there are still some minor issues I would like to be addressed. First, History (American TV network) is not a reliable source. Please do a check on the sources cited to make sure that they are reliable and does not come from a predatory journal.

Secondly, the article uses a lot of weasel words please make the person that is opining clearer unless it is actually the majority view. Carpimaps ^{talk to me!} 11:37, 23 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]