User talk:JC-crowd
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Happy editing! LuniZunie 16:40, 10 October 2025 (UTC)
Crowd Connected moved to draftspace
[edit]Thanks for your contributions to Crowd Connected. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it is promotional and reads like an advertisement and declared COI on userpage, needs to go through AfC. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.
Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit the draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. Sarsenet•he/they•(talk) 14:39, 17 October 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you for taking the time to review the article. I understand your concern about promotional tone.
- I’ll continue improving the draft for neutrality and sourcing, then resubmit it. I’ve also added a note to the article’s talk page to acknowledge your feedback and outline next steps.
- Appreciate the guidance.
- –– JC-crowd (talk) 14:53, 17 October 2025 (UTC)
- Also, because of your COI you must not promote the draft to article space yourself, you must submit it for review Jimfbleak - talk to me? 13:33, 18 October 2025 (UTC)
Draft:Crowd Connected rewritten to address feedback
[edit]Hello User:Sarsenet, User:Jimfbleak, and other editors who commented earlier: I’ve now completed a full rewrite of Draft:Crowd Connected to remove promotional tone and rely only on independent, reliable sources (BBC, Alan Turing Institute, University of Surrey, Innovate UK, UKRI, IQ Magazine, UKTN). All redundant or company-sourced material has been removed, and the structure simplified for neutrality.
I plan to resubmit the draft through AfC shortly. If either of you has time to glance over the current version before that, feedback would be welcome, but I’ll proceed through normal AfC channels.
–– JC-crowd (talk) 11:20, 19 October 2025 (UTC)
AfC notification: Draft:Crowd Connected has a new comment
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Crowd Connected (October 30)
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- Promotional tone, editorializing and other words to watch
- Vague, generic, and speculative statements extrapolated from similar subjects
- Essay-like writing
- Hallucinations (plausible-sounding, but false information) and non-existent references
- Close paraphrasing
- If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Crowd Connected and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
- If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
- If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.
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Hello, JC-crowd!
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