User talk:EdwardJS97/sandbox

Peer review: I agree about the edits that you want to make to "Overview of the elements of a quantum network". It may be helpful to add some more information to each of the small paragraphs in this section- after reading the original article page I was still pretty confused about what actually goes on in a quantum network. Maybe some sort of visual or overview of the processes in a quantum network would help this? I'm a bit unsure about what is happening on the published page with the two sections on "quantum networks for communication", but I think that the second paragraph is more informative and fluid than the first one. Gwen Leifer (talk) 00:15, 11 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Peer review #2: Good content. More clear than the actual page so far. It seems there is a lot of information claimed in this draft, so I would suggest adding maybe another source or two to keep it objective. The page itself is already very populated, so changing some of the existing paragraphs around to reflect your writing style may help with the transitions. Very interesting subject, keep up the great work. --Ghartfie (talk) 01:44, 13 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]