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Which article are you evaluating?

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Bowling for Columbine - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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I chose this article because the documentary has been viewed as controversial for the execution of narrating the story—there is a political push for this film that can be important, and I find that interesting. I also have been planning on watching it for a moment now, so reading about it will be helpful.



Evaluate the article

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Throughout the article there are many run-on sentences—or overly wordy sentences that can be edited into descriptive short sentences. There are many moments where the article reiterates what the documentary is about using different words; again, the sentences could be one instead of multiple. Though there is weakness in some portions of the passage, it does a good job going in depth into the historical event and providing what the director, Michael Moore, does well when evaluating the situation by including moments in the film, what techniques he uses, and who is involved in the film.

It does a fine job remaining neutral by including interviews that Moore had about the situation—it avoids opinions but still includes statistics of gun violence in other countries[1] and supplies many other resources and publications throughout the text. 

  1. ^ "Bowling for Columbine", Wikipedia, 2025-01-10, retrieved 2025-01-25