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Which article are you evaluating?

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Rosa Parks

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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It's a well saturated topic and taught widely in school, was curious what the Wikipedia version would say


Evaluate the article

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I think the article hits all the key points mentioned -- it has a good lead section, up to date information, very detailed information, and the sources are all from reputable sites. The article covers all key aspects of Rosa Parks' life, from her early life and activism to her arrest, the Montgomery Bus Boycott, her years in Detroit, and her legacy. The article is extensively sourced, with references from biographies, academic papers, newspapers, and historical records. The article avoids overly simplistic or mythologized portrayals, presenting Parks as an active, strategic organizer rather than just an accidental symbol. The article is well-organized into clear sections, making it easy to follow. Some sections are lengthy, which might make reading overwhelming. Condensing certain passages or using more bullet points for lists of honors and recognitions could improve readability.

While it mentions controversies, such as Parks' lawsuit against OutKast, it does not deeply explore debates about her legacy, such as how she has been commodified in public memory.

There are some minor formatting inconsistencies, particularly in the referencing style.