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Mihailooo02 peer review: This is a nice opening statement and a nice first sentence. I think it leads well into the article. However, you have not written anything else. As a peer-reviewer, I would suggest that your next step be going over your sources, identifying the information that you want to contribute and that follows the plan that you have outlined in your proposal, and that you go ahead and do it. That is the main point of my peer review. The one sentence that you have looks nice, but other than that, I strongly suggest that you contribute more to your target article.
-Mihailo
The Myth of Mars and Venus is a book by Deborah Cameron, which refutes much of John Gray's Men are From Mars, and Women are From Venus.
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