User contributions for Cygnusaurus

13 March 2020

• 01:2201:22, 13 March 2020 diff hist +5 m Hong Kong flu →The 1968–1969 pandemic
• 01:2101:21, 13 March 2020 diff hist +1 Talk:Hong Kong flu →revision of total U.S. deaths statistic; addition of worldwide death statistic; revision of reasons for lower death rate for flu (whole flu, not just the 1969-1972 wave(s))
• 01:2001:20, 13 March 2020 diff hist +104 Talk:Hong Kong flu →revision of total U.S. deaths statistic; addition of worldwide death statistic; revision of reasons for lower death rate for flu (whole flu, not just the 1969-1972 wave(s))
• 01:1801:18, 13 March 2020 diff hist +2,376 Talk:Hong Kong flu →revision of total U.S. deaths statistic; addition of worldwide death statistic; revision of reasons for lower death rate for flu (whole flu, not just the 1969-1972 wave(s)): new section
• 01:0701:07, 13 March 2020 diff hist +66 m Hong Kong flu No edit summary
• 00:5700:57, 13 March 2020 diff hist −502 Hong Kong flu replaced outdated source of dubious authority (see talk page) with citation from CDC (U.S. government website)
• 00:4200:42, 13 March 2020 diff hist +104 Hong Kong flu The author who cited 33,800 as the number of U.S. deaths is drawing from a source over 10 years old. Also, the discussion of reasons for a milder "second wave" of the flu is based on a misreading of the source. I discuss both of these major revisions in the talk page.

4 October 2019

• 23:5623:56, 4 October 2019 diff hist +9 m Joker (2019 film) Randal "lies that..." chagned to Randall "lies and says that..." (You can't "lie that" something, at least not in Enlgish.)

23 August 2019

• 01:2601:26, 23 August 2019 diff hist +132 Talk:Job Control Language →grammatical relationship between "JES extensions" and "Job Entry Control Language (JECL)"
• 01:2401:24, 23 August 2019 diff hist +1,826 Talk:Job Control Language →grammatical relationship between "JES extensions" and "Job Entry Control Language (JECL)": new section

10 August 2019

• 18:5518:55, 10 August 2019 diff hist +507 Wikipedia:Requests for page protection →Sutton Coldfield
• 16:0016:00, 10 August 2019 diff hist +960 Talk:Benzino No edit summary
• 15:5415:54, 10 August 2019 diff hist −38 Benzino No edit summary
• 15:5215:52, 10 August 2019 diff hist −57 Benzino took out same vandalism as before: unsourced claims, expressions of opinion

6 August 2019

• 04:4204:42, 6 August 2019 diff hist −106 Benzino another attempt to clean article from what is either juvenile editing or intentional trolling/vandalism
• 04:3804:38, 6 August 2019 diff hist +127 Talk:Benzino No edit summary
• 04:3604:36, 6 August 2019 diff hist +1,787 Talk:Benzino →repeated editing of article that does not follow guidelines: new section
• 03:0703:07, 6 August 2019 diff hist +18 Jefferson City High School JCHS changed from block to traditional beginning in Fall of 2019

3 August 2019

• 19:4719:47, 3 August 2019 diff hist +5 m Lockheed Martin Information Technology No edit summary

26 July 2019

• 13:4613:46, 26 July 2019 diff hist −12 Benzino took out claim that he was "booked for 1 year" (whatever that means): not true, not supported by source, obviously just made-up, borderline vandalism

18 July 2019

• 02:4802:48, 18 July 2019 diff hist −1 m Benzino incorrect use of comma

17 July 2019

• 15:4415:44, 17 July 2019 diff hist −70 Benzino removed the phrase "Eminem has been proven right that Benzino is a racist and hates woman.", which is an opinion and is not referenced.
• 03:0503:05, 17 July 2019 diff hist +9 Benzino No edit summary
• 03:0103:01, 17 July 2019 diff hist +78 Benzino No edit summary
• 02:5802:58, 17 July 2019 diff hist +2 Benzino No edit summary
• 02:5702:57, 17 July 2019 diff hist 0 Benzino No edit summary
• 02:5602:56, 17 July 2019 diff hist −11 Benzino →External links
• 02:5502:55, 17 July 2019 diff hist +375 Benzino No edit summary

28 June 2019

• 21:3721:37, 28 June 2019 diff hist 0 m Keychain fixed a classic "..., however, ..." comma splice (to which there will never be an end) with a semicolon

27 June 2019

• 18:1518:15, 27 June 2019 diff hist +5 m Third generation of video game consoles "this" in "at the end of 'this' generation" is ambiguous (as it could refer to 'previous' generation mentioned in preceding clause); removed ambiguity by replacing "this" with "third"

18 March 2019

• 04:4504:45, 18 March 2019 diff hist +540 Category talk:Defunct companies based in Kansas →Why is Showbiz Pizza listed here?: new section

4 January 2019

• 13:0713:07, 4 January 2019 diff hist −4 m Trans-Siberian Orchestra Removed "has" in "has managed". He's dead. The present perfect aspect no longer applies to him.

13 September 2018

• 00:1700:17, 13 September 2018 diff hist 0 m Glasses Fixed classic comma splice error: from "(clause), however, (clause)" to “(clause). However, (clause)." Rule: two clauses cannot be joined by a comma, but only by a conjunction; "however" is not a conjunction (there is no conjunction at all that appears with commas on both sides of it).

10 June 2018

• 01:4801:48, 10 June 2018 diff hist −66 Brendan Sullivan (lawyer) removed vandalism about winning "Great Kentucky Derby Cornhole Tournament of 2018"

5 June 2018

• 22:5322:53, 5 June 2018 diff hist +565 Straw donor another high profile case of straw donor prosecution added

28 May 2018

• 20:3320:33, 28 May 2018 diff hist +223 Richard Secord added information about Secord's guilty plea

6 May 2018

• 02:4602:46, 6 May 2018 diff hist +332 m Chiang Yung-Ning note on death Tag: Visual edit

4 July 2017

• 01:0701:07, 4 July 2017 diff hist +2 m Conservative coalition changed "operate" to "cooperate" on civil rights bills (which is surely the sense here) Tag: Visual edit

29 June 2017

• 04:3304:33, 29 June 2017 diff hist −53 Evans, Novak, Hunt & Shields You can't have a sentence that says something "is" something "for" a certain amount of time. It's not grammatical. There's also no putting up directives telling people they can't change something. If it's wrong, then it gets changed. Why no discussion? Tag: Visual edit

26 June 2017

• 02:3602:36, 26 June 2017 diff hist 0 m American Conservative Union "on their level of conservative" changed to "level of conservatism" (has to be a noun, not an adjective) Tag: Visual edit

17 June 2017

• 01:2501:25, 17 June 2017 diff hist +14 m The History of White People in America No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 01:2401:24, 17 June 2017 diff hist +250 The History of White People in America Recordings of the show available on You Tube demonstrate that each segment deals with a particular theme. Tag: Visual edit
• 01:2101:21, 17 June 2017 diff hist 0 The History of White People in America The artifact was a series of 30-minute vignettes and not a movie. This is clear from the LA Times review cited in References. Also, the series appeared not on HBO, but on Cinemax, also clearly stated in the LA Times review. Tag: Visual edit