Draft:Fallen hunger (roblox creation)

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Declined by Samoht27 19 days ago. Last edited by Samoht27 19 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: In accordance with Wikipedia's Conflict of interest policy, I disclose that I have a conflict of interest regarding the subject of this article. Mr beast but its not mr beast (talk) 20:16, 23 April 2025 (UTC)

Fallen hunger story

in the game you are a highschool sudent,after a long PE lesson what takes place in a month where days are half as long it is as dark as when it is 3AM your teacher instructs you tosearch the nearby showers to find 2 students "aronn mathews" and "thomas white" you search until coming across a hole , blocking you from 2 hallways you attempt to jumpover it but slip and fall down. you wake up in a puddle of blood before seing aronn mathews crawling to you before a creature attacks and consumes him. you wake up again and explore the large area until coming across a resturant while walkig towards it you hear a large roar behind you.you turn around to see the creature rushing towards you you tumble through the resturant doors only to see the creature has disapeared you ask the employees why they are here and they say "i cant disclose that" you ask for a sandwich when they explain that their chef went missing while going outside for food supplies they tell you to run out and get the supplies. you find them next to a skeleton wearing a chefs hat you also have to complete orders. after asking the employees if you can sleep there you wake up, only to discover the creature has broke in and killed the employees you repeat this 3 more times before the 4th resturant employee says sometimes a ladder lowers from above but noone can climb up before it disapears.you suddenly see it lower you run over and start climbing before seeing the creature and then you blackout you wake up lying down. you soon realise that you are in heaven and that you are dead.it turns out that while searching in the showers a deadly gas is realeased, killing everyone in the changing rooms and you. a case is opened to find out what happened after the school shuts down but the case is concluded as an accident