User talk:Scarito/sandbox
Hi Scarito,
I unfortunately did not get a chance to read the article before your edited it, so I don't have much to compare your work to. However, this section is very clear and the tone is consistent with Wikipedia's standards of unbiased verbiage. A couple critiques:
- scopolamine is not only used in pharmacological research, but also academic, behavioral, and clinical research.
- One sentence uses "mediating" twice - "Acetylcholine projections in hippocampal neurons, which are vital mediating in mediating long term potentiation..."
Other than that, looks good!