User talk:Sblum24/sandbox

Peer review

Honestly the only thing I can mention is asking where in the paragraph you want to put this. Your citations seem good and the info is clear and concise. I'd recommend putting it last or right in between the historical record and the wager plot, depending on whether you want to order it by chronology or by the amount of the play it influence or whatever. Since it probably won't be first, I might add the word "also" in the beginning of your first sentence, between Shakespeare and "drew".
-SMambs (talk) 02:42, 22 April 2019 (UTC)