User talk:Rshah10/Hypertext
Peer Review Comment for HIPS class
[edit]The etymology part seems pretty unnecessary and not super common for a wiki like this - consider removing.
You need to reference more of your sources - there is very little of this now. The content of almost every sentence should be sourced. Especially quotes (i.e van Dam says "foreshadowed wikis, blogs and communal documents of all kinds”)
You should be linking to other wikis more (i.e. Xerox)
in Social and cultural anthropology, I’m confused as to what is meant by sections v, t, and e -- are these just not edited yet?
During this period, Nelson.... why is this highlighted?
You largely stop in 1992 -- seems like you should give a bit more than that.