User talk:Plusoneplusone/Electronic commerce modeling language

Hi! I added a new peer review to you draft in your sandbox. Hope you are having a great day. Bobalily (talk) 09:49, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I enjoyed the comprehensive and neutral tone of the article!

I think that this subject may be difficult to understand for a few audiences, especially those who are not familiar with electronic commerce modeling language. If you could provide more background, context, or easy to discern information in your lead section, that would be very helpful.

In the alliances section, I thought that was also neutral, but if you could further explain the relevancy of these alliances, it might be more beneficial to the reader. Overall, the structure of the article was maintained well, and the sources were both academic and non-biased. ~~lilmeowmeow3161~~