User talk:Moralej2/Sheltered instruction
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[edit]The section you added is quite strong, but it is not clear whether you are adding them to what is already there or replacing the current sections of the article.
If you are not replacing, there are many problems in the existing text that need to be addressed:
--Consider moving this sentence from the Lede to the definition section: "The phrase "sheltered instruction", the original concept, and the underlying theory of comprehensible input are all credited to Stephen Krashen." - Sheltered instruction is not a teaching style. It is a strategy. - The whole second paragraph in the definition section has many problems with grammar and word choice. Lndmayg (talk) 14:20, 5 April 2024 (UTC)