User talk:Madisonbranch21/Magazine Street

I have reviewed your article. Inspiration 2.0 (talk) 19:25, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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I've moved your draft, as it was somehow connected to another student's sandbox, which may have caused some confusion with the peer reviews. Let me know if you have trouble accessing it going forward.

The structure you have so far is a good start. Your lead, though, references the street's popularity with small boutique businesses, so I hope you are planning on adding a section that explores that unique aspect of the street. While you wouldn't want to talk about every store and restaurant on Magazine, you could highlight and describe a few of the more significant ones, or you could consider lists, as we discussed in class.

The writing needs some better attention to detail. You also want to recognize that having each paragraph with just one source at the end is not an ideal way to synthesize research. It's better to have multiple sources within each paragraph.

Nice work so far! jtodd1973 20:13, 7 March 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jtodd1973 (talk • contribs)