User talk:Macpatel

I deleted the link in the Tim Hawkes web page (www.kings.edu.au). If you must include links, put them in the external links section. Also, your comments on Timothy HAwkes' page including 'Timothy Hawkes is of a very old and distinguished family' are unencylopedic AND lack references. Also avoid refering to people by their first name in the article eg 'Tim is also a leading'. Furthermore, comments such as 'Situated on 120 hectares at North Parramatta, the school provides a happy, healthy and action-packed lifestyle for its students, offering the best of both rural and urban life in Australia's largest cosmopolitan city.' are POV and sound like they should be in a news letter. I also deleted most of the family life section that you wrote 'Jane and Tim have been married for 33 years. They fell in love at Durham University in England. He had gone there to play rugby union under the guise of doing an honors degree in education. Both Tim and Jane come from very old and distinguished families. Their marriage has produced three children: 1 son Peter, and 2 daughters Alicia and Pippa.' No references, unencylopedic and POV. If you want to change things, i suggest you check out the talk pages and get consensus first. Cheers (Captain hoek (talk) 21:01, 14 September 2008 (UTC))

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