User talk:Jullappy/sandbox

Adding Sources

Your sources look great. Go ahead and add them to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:27, 12 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

      Added them. Jullappy (talk) 14:36, 15 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The Lead

Your lead is good. I suggest deleting the phrase "as a means of transportation." It's redundant. Also, remove the bold type from the last sentence and figure out how to make "high-density polyethylene" lower-case and still keep the internal link (there is a way).

Add the lead to the article with these small changes. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:42, 22 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Excellent work. A big improvement to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:19, 26 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]