User talk:Intilop

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I reverted your edits at TCP offload engine, since is was badly capitalized and punctuated, commercial spammy, and speculative. If you have something sourced to an WP:RS, speak up here or on the article talk page and I'll help you add it. Dicklyon (talk) 21:46, 10 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Also please read WP:CORPNAME and WP:COI. Dicklyon (talk) 22:38, 10 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Intilop: Would you please be a little more specific about captilizated? The communications protocols are always used as Caplitalized, so I am confused. Please help us make the right choice of words/langauge so it would not sound too commercial. What We tried to write is true but it may sound too 'commercially'. How much performance or function related contents are you allowed to enter? Thx, Intilop

"full TCP Offload Engines" and "TCP offload Engine" seem like random capitalization. The spelling in the sentences was also pretty awful. You might want to log in, and sign with four tildes (~~~~), which will auto-expand to your name and time. Dicklyon (talk) 06:28, 12 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

And since you appear to be representing the company that you're writing about, it would be better to request additions, on the article talk page, rather than add stuff about your company yourself. Dicklyon (talk) 06:30, 12 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Dick, Thx. I think I am getting it.... Can I have access to the original text I had edited?.. will try and correct it. Yes, I do rep the company. And would love to invite other comments/info about the technology and product. So next time when I am editing, I will do so. Thx, Intilop.

Yes, you can always look in your contributions or in the article history and get the diff or the version. Let me know if you need help figuring it out. Dicklyon (talk) 05:06, 13 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

And please do read Wikipedia:AVOIDCOI, and maybe the rest of that page. Dicklyon (talk) 05:07, 13 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]