User talk:Embby

Your submission at Articles for creation: Travelers United (September 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 16:36, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

Hello! Embby, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Robert McClenon (talk) 16:36, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Travelers United (October 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

This draft still reads like an advertisement. It contains multiple paragraphs of the form "Travelers United believes" and is long on description of advocacy, so that this draft is itself advocacy.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 03:13, 4 October 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Travelers United (December 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Primefac was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

There are too many sources that barely even mention Travelers United, most of them being "said spokesperson XYZ of Travelers United." Please add additional independent reliable sources that discuss the subject in detail. This means more than just a paragraph with a quote from someone who works there. The coverage should be about Travelers United specifically.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Primefac (talk) 03:32, 28 December 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Travelers United has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Travelers United. Thanks! Primefac (talk) 22:20, 3 January 2017 (UTC)

Hello, Embby. Your question has been answered at the Teahouse Q&A board. Feel free to reply there!
Please note that all old questions are archived after 2–3 days of inactivity. Message added by — Vchimpanzee • talk • contributions • 20:57, 6 January 2017 (UTC). (You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{teahouse talkback}} template.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Travelers United (February 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

Still not significant to satisfy our simplest policies, the sources are simply business announcements, mentions, interviews and quotes and, for example, the NYT is simply what the chairman authored himself, it's unconvincing for notability itself. The agenda is too similar what their own website would say, and there's simply nothing else significant. Focus only with the basic essentials of major independent news; no interviews, press releases or any similar.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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SwisterTwister talk 22:27, 14 February 2017 (UTC)

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AfC notification: Draft:Travelers United has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Travelers United. Thanks! SwisterTwister talk 06:05, 23 February 2017 (UTC)

Proposed deletion of Share Better

Hello, Embby. I wanted to let you know that I’m proposing an article that you started, Share Better, for deletion because I don't think it meets our criteria for inclusion. If you don't want the article deleted:

1. edit the page
2. remove the text that looks like this: {{proposed deletion/dated...}}
3. save the page

Also, be sure to explain why you think the article should be kept in your edit summary or on the article's talk page. If you don't do so, it may be deleted later anyway.

You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions.

menaechmi (talk) 15:57, 17 August 2017 (UTC)

Proposed deletion of Dorothy Pines

Hello, Embby

Welcome to Wikipedia! I edit here too, under the username SportingFlyer and it's nice to meet you :-)

I wanted to let you know that I’ve proposed an article that you started, Dorothy Pines, for deletion because it meets one of the relevant criterion. The particular issue can be located in the notice, that is now visible at the top of the article.

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2. Remove the text that looks like this: {{proposed deletion/dated...}}
3. Click the Publish changes button.

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SportingFlyer T·C 02:11, 27 October 2019 (UTC)