User talk:Deviruki/sandbox
Homework for February 6th
[edit]GameStick. I plan to edit the lead section of the article as some of the wording is a bit awkward.
- Approved. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:56, 10 February 2015 (UTC)
- The first sentence is a good fix. The rest of your edits, however, didn't really improve the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 21:52, 17 February 2015 (UTC)
Homework for February 9th
[edit]Toe_(band). I plan to add articles for the missing albums and add sources/citations as needed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Deviruki (talk • contribs) 23:52, 8 February 2015 (UTC)
- If you're passionate about this, go ahead. But you may need to do a good bit of writing as this is a very short article. If you change your mind, let me know. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:58, 10 February 2015 (UTC)
Assignment 3
[edit]Your draft look good. I recommend that you move the mention of his death to the end and merge the short paragraphs into one or two longer ones. In the first sentence, you need a comma before "born." Josef Horáček (talk) 07:48, 2 March 2015 (UTC)