User talk:Dcorchado/sandbox

Hey Dorcas,

I was really impressed that you collected a lot of related citing sources for this work. I think your works on the detailed explanation about the component and wall issues would be quite helpful for not only other Wikipedian but general users to further understand on cavity wall.

Just some suggestions and questions: 1. I suggest you that you add some detailed explanation of each component of the cavity wall in order to help readers more easily understand. Or, bringing some multimedia sources (images, video clips, photos) which show the components would be another great way. 2. You mentioned that brick walls are used for the outer wall, but would not there be an exception? This seems to be the buildings which are composed of the cavity wall should be always covered with bricks. I guess there would be some cavity-wall-buildings with other masonry components (stone or so). Could you please check it again?

Thanks for reading. Jungseop (talk) 04:57, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Instructor comments

I agree with your peer reviewer's comments, although a short and simple written description of each component should suffice for this assignment. Indeed, the outer or veneer wythe can be of a material other than brick masonry.

Elizabeth Linden Rahway (talk) 02:53, 27 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]