User talk:Aasthak/sandbox
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[edit]I'm an online ambassador for your WMST 250: Women, Art, and Culture (2014 Q3) class and have just stopped by to provide a quick review and add what I hope will be helpful comments.
You've done a great job with this article. It's organized well, is written in an encyclopedic tone, had citations for the content and had a good list of her works.
Some suggestions are:
- It seems to me that one of the assignments was to identify reliable sources. One of the article's sources is a primary source, the subject's own website and the other two are bookseller sites, which may have been written by the subject and are not considered the best sources because they market her works (i.e., have a bias). As a biography of a living person, this article would likely be tagged as a BLP sources issue / needing better sources. You may want to check out sources like these.
- Update: Someone has also started a version of the Marie Redonnet article in article space, which has reliable sources - that might be the best first step.--CaroleHenson (talk) 19:10, 1 November 2014 (UTC)
- If you want to add a further reading section, there are also related books from World Cat.
- a minor nitpicky item: punctuation comes before citations. I made a few edits as examples.
I'll check in on you again, and I'll be watching this page if you have any questions or comments.--CaroleHenson (talk) 02:17, 1 November 2014 (UTC)
I have uploaded an image of Marie Redonnet on your page User:Alasia50 — Preceding undated comment added 21:28, 1 December 2014 (UTC)
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[edit]I saw that you had uploaded an image. If you wanted to have an image for this article, you could add a cover to a book, like this one under Template:PD-simple.--CaroleHenson (talk) 02:30, 1 November 2014 (UTC)
