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Your submission at Articles for creation: Lane Cove Concert Band (August 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ktkvtsh was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Find independent secondary sources to prove WP:GNG.

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Ktkvtsh (talk) 20:15, 25 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, 203.220.221.175! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Ktkvtsh (talk) 20:15, 25 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lane Cove Concert Band (August 26)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SafariScribe was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Doesn't meet WP:NBAND.

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Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 09:59, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your review, I do need some assistance with listing the awards that the band has won... They're held on the Band Association of NSW Contest results database-https://bandnsw.com/ContestResults.php ...so not sure how to cite this source? Other sources are here on their website https://www.lccb.org.au/cws-places-2nd-in-state-band-championships/ 203.220.221.175 (talk) 10:45, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lane Cove Concert Band (October 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Deb was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Written in poor English. Deb (talk) 14:53, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Deb (talk) 14:53, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Lane Cove Concert Band

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 15:09, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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