User talk:15darrylc/sandbox
Mayank's Review
[edit]This article is mostly well structured, and (until now, mind you) well written. You have only one source until now, and this may eventually be cause of your article's demise. I feel that the sections "Areas of Business" should be merged into the section "Corporate Affairs", which is basically the same thing. Good progress. Cheers:). 15mayankm (talk) 03:00, 13 May 2013 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 15mayankm (talk • contribs) 02:58, 13 May 2013 (UTC)