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[edit]Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.
Option 1
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- Communism in Malaysia
- Article Evaluation
- The lead provides a good, brief overview with a concise first sentence. It is missing a more in depth historical breakdown including its origins and the Malayan Emergency. The sources are mainly by Western authors, and could potentially benefit from Eastern scholarship given the region.
- Sources
- Weiss, Meredith L. 2020. “Legacies of the Cold War in Malaysia: Anything but Communism.” Journal of Contemporary Asia 50 (4): 511–29. doi:10.1080/00472336.2019.1709128.:Yong, C. F. “Origins and Development of the Malayan Communist Movement, 1919-1930.” Modern Asian Studies 25, no. 4 (1991): 625–48. http://www.jstor.org/stable/312747.
Option 2
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- Popular Socialist Party (Haiti)
- Article Evaluation
- The lead has a somewhat poor flow, with a weak introductory sentence.:The article states that the party was suppressed by "the regime". It has no further details on how, or who "the regime" is.:This article is a stub, and has no sources.
- Sources
- Pamphile, Leon D. Contrary Destinies: A Century of America’s Occupation, Deoccupation, and Reoccupation of Haiti. University Press of Florida, 2015. https://doi.org/10.2307/j.ctvx0706b.:Smith, Matthew J. Red and Black in Haiti: Radicalism, Conflict, and Political Change, 1934-1957. Univ of North Carolina Press, 2009.
Option 3
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- Military Committee of the Congolese Party of Labour
- Article Evaluation
- The body of the article is unbalanced. It lists the membership of the military committee without talking about why it came about or its policies.
- Sources
- I struggled to find sources for this article.
Option 4
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- Politics of Asia
- Article Evaluation
- This article has no peer reviewed sources. It lacks balance, and needs sections on some of the information mentioned in the lead like colonialism, independence movements, and tensions between countries.
- Sources
- Holcombe, Charles. A history of East Asia. Cambridge University Press, 2017.:Murphy, R. Taggart. Japan and the shackles of the past. New York: Oxford University Press, 2017.:Pomeranz, Kenneth. The great divergence: China, Europe, and the making of the Modern World Economy. Princeton, NJ: Princeton University Press, 2021.:Reid, Anthony. Southeast Asia in the age of commerce: 1450-1680. vol. 1, the lands below the Winds. New Haven: Yale University Press, 1988.
Option 5
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- Le Chan (general)
- Article Evaluation
- This is a red article, and doesn't exist yet. However, on the Vietnamese Wiki, it has a long page!:https://vi.wikipedia.org/wiki/L%C3%AA_Ch%C3%A2n:The Vietnamese article has an excellent lead, as well as sections about her early life, life as a general, and position as a figure of worship.:However, it is lacking in credible sourcing.
- Sources
I couldn't find any sources for this page, and think it may not meet Wikipedia's standards for notability.