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Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

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Article title
Communism in Malaysia
Article Evaluation
The lead provides a good, brief overview with a concise first sentence. It is missing a more in depth historical breakdown including its origins and the Malayan Emergency. The sources are mainly by Western authors, and could potentially benefit from Eastern scholarship given the region.
Sources
Weiss, Meredith L. 2020. “Legacies of the Cold War in Malaysia: Anything but Communism.” Journal of Contemporary Asia 50 (4): 511–29. doi:10.1080/00472336.2019.1709128.:Yong, C. F. “Origins and Development of the Malayan Communist Movement, 1919-1930.” Modern Asian Studies 25, no. 4 (1991): 625–48. http://www.jstor.org/stable/312747.

Option 2

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Article title
Popular Socialist Party (Haiti)
Article Evaluation
The lead has a somewhat poor flow, with a weak introductory sentence.:The article states that the party was suppressed by "the regime". It has no further details on how, or who "the regime" is.:This article is a stub, and has no sources.
Sources
Pamphile, Leon D. Contrary Destinies: A Century of America’s Occupation, Deoccupation, and Reoccupation of Haiti. University Press of Florida, 2015. https://doi.org/10.2307/j.ctvx0706b.:Smith, Matthew J. Red and Black in Haiti: Radicalism, Conflict, and Political Change, 1934-1957. Univ of North Carolina Press, 2009.

Option 3

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Article title
Military Committee of the Congolese Party of Labour
Article Evaluation
The body of the article is unbalanced. It lists the membership of the military committee without talking about why it came about or its policies.
Sources
I struggled to find sources for this article.

Option 4

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Article title
Politics of Asia
Article Evaluation
This article has no peer reviewed sources. It lacks balance, and needs sections on some of the information mentioned in the lead like colonialism, independence movements, and tensions between countries.
Sources
Holcombe, Charles. A history of East Asia. Cambridge University Press, 2017.:Murphy, R. Taggart. Japan and the shackles of the past. New York: Oxford University Press, 2017.:Pomeranz, Kenneth. The great divergence: China, Europe, and the making of the Modern World Economy. Princeton, NJ: Princeton University Press, 2021.:Reid, Anthony. Southeast Asia in the age of commerce: 1450-1680. vol. 1, the lands below the Winds. New Haven: Yale University Press, 1988.

Option 5

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Article title
Le Chan (general)
Article Evaluation
This is a red article, and doesn't exist yet. However, on the Vietnamese Wiki, it has a long page!:https://vi.wikipedia.org/wiki/L%C3%AA_Ch%C3%A2n:The Vietnamese article has an excellent lead, as well as sections about her early life, life as a general, and position as a figure of worship.:However, it is lacking in credible sourcing.
Sources

I couldn't find any sources for this page, and think it may not meet Wikipedia's standards for notability.