User:Vinchenstein/Evaluate an Article
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Complete your article evaluation below. Here are the key aspects to consider: Lead sectionA good lead section defines the topic and provides a concise overview. A reader who just wants to identify the topic can read the first sentence. A reader who wants a very brief overview of the most important things about it can read the first paragraph. A reader who wants a quick overview can read the whole lead section.
ContentA good Wikipedia article should cover all the important aspects of a topic, without putting too much weight on one part while neglecting another.
Tone and BalanceWikipedia articles should be written from a neutral point of view; if there are substantial differences of interpretation or controversies among published, reliable sources, those views should be described as fairly as possible.
Sources and ReferencesA Wikipedia article should be based on the best sources available for the topic at hand. When possible, this means academic and peer-reviewed publications or scholarly books.
Organization and writing qualityThe writing should be clear and professional, the content should be organized sensibly into sections.
Images and Media
Talk page discussionThe article's talk page — and any discussions among other Wikipedia editors that have been taking place there — can be a useful window into the state of an article, and might help you focus on important aspects that you didn't think of.
Overall impressions
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved. |
Which article are you evaluating?
[edit]Armored Core VI: Fires of Rubicon
Why you have chosen this article to evaluate
[edit]I chose the Armored Core VI Wikipedia article because the game is relatively new, so I expected the article on it to have some errors/missing info. It seemed to have a decent amount of info however, when I investigated it.
Evaluate the article
[edit]The lead section of the article is quite well made, and includes an introductory sentence that describes the overall game quite well. It is also quite concise, and only has a few sentences and not too many, but has all of the necessary info. The lead section also mentions that the game received generally favorable reviews, which to me seemed like bias at first, however upon further inspection I realized that it did receive generally favorable reviews, though having that at the end of the lead section could still be looked at as framing.
As for the content of the article, it seems quite basic in some areas. The gameplay portion of the article is still missing a variety of aspects from the game, such as movement and the different types of legs you can use, among many other things. There are also no pictures whatsoever in the article, besides the cover for the game. The data in the article is quite new, coming from just the end of August as all of the references on the bottom of the page show, and the data itself is still quite accurate overall despite being so basic. I'm sure that they could have used better references as well, as many of them are news-related instead of being from independent reviewers, such as Destructoid. The article is also well written, appearing professional in all of the paragraphs discussing the various topics surrounding the game. I also noticed zero grammatical errors, which was good as well.
I also checked the talk page for the article, which is barren and has no posts as of now. Considering that the article is new, hopefully more will pop up in the future. Overall, I'd say the status of the article is that it is still new and needs some more content. All of the data in the article is accurate, despite the fact that there is very little. The plot synopsis is also very well made and detailed.