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From Dr. Hildebrandt: Great job on this, Chris. Keep up with it.

1.)Ecological Competence was the stub article chosen. I chose this article because I believe ecology is something that should have more attention paid to it and information about it is lacking in regard to public knowledge. Ecological competence

2.) The stub class labeling can be found at the top of the talk page where it classifies the article as a stub class.

3.) The article could use more development essentially everywhere as only definitions for different perspectives are given. More information regarding how ecological competent species and humanity are could be added to further develop the article. Developing sections for how it's applied in nature and across cultures could benefit the article. Perhaps describing how developed different countries across the world are ecologically competent could be added as well. Perhaps more background into ecological competence could be given as well. This could be done by expressing how it's evolved over time in different species. Or some historical documentation could be put into to describe how humanity has ecologically developed over time.

4.) The references list an organizational website that speaks toward the biological aspect while the others are publications that seem to discuss cultural aspects. The referred source links appear to maintain functionality.

5.) Compared to other more developed articles, this one appears to be missing a lot of content. The only sections it commonly shares are those on microbiology and sociology, where it briefly describes the outlooks of ecology from their perspectives.

SA #18

1.) Engineering cybernetics

2.) Tiltwing

3.) Aortic body

SA #19 & 20

Engineering cybernetics should follow the guide on science communication. The guide states to avoid blogs, press releases, and university websites when it comes to finding sources. It asks for sources that are reliable such as peer-reviewed articles or books as well as certain press articles known for fact checking such as science sections within the New York Times, and The Atlantic. The article itself appears able to an expansion of many things. Although a conclusion is present it remains a single sentence, perhaps additional context into what engineering cybernetics is would be helpful. The history provided is quite short as well. More information on what has been done in the field might be available and exemplify where it is going. There are sections on usages in media and popular usages, yet perhaps there should be one pertaining on how it's used today and/or being developed.

Two potential sources:

Jiao, R., Commuri, S., Panchal, J., Milisavljevic-Syed, J., Allen, J. K., Mistree, F., and Schaefer, D. (June 4, 2021). "Design Engineering in the Age of Industry 4.0." ASME. J. Mech. Des. July 2021; 143(7): 070801. https://doi-org.libproxy.siue.edu/10.1115/1.4051041

Dixon, W., and Bellman, M. (September 1, 2016). "Cycling." ASME. Mechanical Engineering. September 2016; 138(09): S3–S7. https://doi-org.libproxy.siue.edu/10.1115/1.2016-Sep-4

SA #21

Potential sources of info for Aortic body:

Piskuric, Nikol A., and Colin A. Nurse. “Expanding Role of ATP as a Versatile Messenger at Carotid and Aortic Body Chemoreceptors.” Journal of Physiology, vol. 591, no. 2, Jan. 2013, pp. 415–22. EBSCOhost, https://doi-org.libproxy.siue.edu/10.1113/jphysiol.2012.234377.

Khodakaram-Tafti, Azizolah, et al. “Aortic Body Chemodectoma in a Cow: Clinical, Morphopathological, and Immunohistochemical Study.” Comparative Clinical Pathology, vol. 20, no. 6, Dec. 2011, pp. 677–79. EBSCOhost, https://doi-org.libproxy.siue.edu/10.1007/s00580-011-1221-8.

SA #22

Engineering cybernetics*

Negoita, C.V. (1992). Cybernetics and Applied Systems (1st ed.). CRC Press. https://doi-org.libproxy.siue.edu/10.1201/9781482277180

• Speaks toward different definitions of cybernetics used by different scientists
• States that cybernetics are thought processes

Jiao, R., Commuri, S., Panchal, J., Milisavljevic-Syed, J., Allen, J. K., Mistree, F., and Schaefer, D. (June 4, 2021). "Design Engineering in the Age of Industry 4.0." ASME. J. Mech. Des. July 2021; 143(7): 070801. https://doi-org.libproxy.siue.edu/10.1115/1.4051041

• Inclusion of potential industry section
• discusses methods of integration of cybernetics into industries
• discusses challenges of merging systems

Dixon, W., and Bellman, M. (September 1, 2016). "Cycling." ASME. Mechanical Engineering. September 2016; 138(09): S3–S7. https://doi-org.libproxy.siue.edu/10.1115/1.2016-Sep-4

• A section on uses or developments perhaps.
• Mainly focuses on Functional Electrical Stimulation
• specifically cycling