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Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

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Women In Israel
Article Evaluation
Introductory sentence is good, historical context is mentioned, along with politics and employment. There is no new information that isn't mentioned in the lead. The article is a good amount of concise. Content is relevant to Israel, but is not very up to date with modern statistics and laws. A lot of missing information on minority groups and other accomplished women. Article only shows mainstream narratives, doesn't speak about other minority groups too often. Article is generally neutral, has little to no bias, represents women, but lacking in descriptions of other minority groups. Many sources are valid but some are very outdated, especially when it comes to statistics. A small amount of minority sources. Better sources are available and will be added in an edit. Sections are Mostly clear but could be improved. Images are used and are not copyrighted. Many messages on the talk page say that the article needs to be revitalized, it currently has a C rating. It's different from our class in the sense that this article does not talk about minority groups at all or any diaspora between different ethnic groups in Israel. Overall, the article is moderately developed in demographics, laws, and historical context. It can be improved in the matters of the statistics, laws, minority groups, and its culture and media.
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[1] https://en.idi.org.il/arab-society/2023/?chapter=55097 [3] https://www.nif.org/stories/social-and-economic-justice/highlighting-discrimination-against-ethiopian-israeli-women/ [4] https://jwa.org/thisweek/may/17/2020/pnina-tamanu-shata-sworn-office-israeli-minister-aliyah-and-integration [5] https://israeled.org/hanin-zoabi-is-born/#:~:text=Arab%20Knesset%20Member%20Hanin%20Zoabi,three%20seats%20the%20party%20wins. [6] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ethiopian_Jews_in_Israel [7] https://www.israel21c.org/timeline-of-lgbtq-rights-in-israel/ [8] https://www.washingtonblade.com/2023/12/29/israeli-supreme-court-rules-lgbtq-couples-can-adopt-children/#:~:text=BY%20ANITA%20GOULD%20%7C%20Six%20years,allows%20LGBTQ%20couples%20to%20adopt. [9] https://www.equaldex.com/region/israel [10] http://batkol.org [11] https://web.archive.org/web/20190228163057/https://www.aswatgroup.org/aswat [12] In Between (2016)IMDbhttps://www.imdb.com › title
[1] https://wordswithoutborders.org/contributors/view/orly-castel-bloom/ [2] https://jwa.org/encyclopedia/article/matalon-ronit [3] https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/101825.Dorit_Rabinyan [4] https://eurovision.tv/participant/netta-barzilai [5] https://www.weforum.org/people/achinoam-noa-nini/ [6] https://www.theguardian.com/music/2018/may/10/viva-la-diva-how-eurovisions-dana-international-made-trans-identity-mainstream [7] https://www.weforum.org/people/lucy-aharish/ [8] https://www.nytimes.com/2018/01/04/movies/in-between-review.html
[1] https://hadassahfoundation.org/news/what-were-reading-israel/ [2] https://en.idi.org.il/articles/48099 [3] https://www.jpost.com/israel-news/politics-and-diplomacy/article-749802 [4] https://main.knesset.gov.il/en/news/pressreleases/pages/press18723p.aspx [5] https://en.zulat.org.il/en/our-mission/ [6] https://www.timesofisrael.com/bill-allowing-gender-segregation-in-graduate-courses-passes-1st-knesset-vote/ [7] https://www.timesofisrael.com/feminist-groups-decry-law-setting-quota-for-women-in-body-that-elects-chief-rabbis/
[1] https://www.calcalistech.com/ctechnews/article/hkg2bnx49 [2] https://finder.startupnationcentral.org/program_page/wmn1 [3] https://www.timesofisrael.com/queenb-and-wework-creating-opportunities-for-girls-in-hi-tech/ [4] https://www.haaretz.com/2009-06-03/ty-article/secular-jews-may-be-minority-in-israeli-schools-by-2030/0000017f-f70a-d5bd-a17f-f73a0f930000 [5] https://m.knesset.gov.il/EN/activity/mmm/me040618.pdf [6] https://tautrust.org/closing-the-academic-gender-gap-in-israel/ [7] https://ideas.repec.org/h/wsi/wschap/9789811283499_0007.html [8] https://www.haaretz.com/israel-news/tech-news/2020-09-30/ty-article/.premium/the-israeli-tech-making-sure-workers-worldwide-get-paid-despite-coronavirus/0000017f-e153-d9aa-afff-f95b92d60000 [9] https://en.globes.co.il/en/article-eco-wave-power-raises-136m-in-stockholm-ipo-1001294367 [10] https://www.israel21c.org/bringing-female-entrepreneurs-back-to-war-hit-northern-israel/
https://textologia.net/?p=17645 [2] https://cris.bgu.ac.il/en/publications/scholarship-identity-and-power-mizrahi-women-in-israel-3 [3] https://www.academy.ac.il/SystemFiles2015/Bulletin%2027_05%20Dahan%20Kalev.pdf

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