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Which article are you evaluating?

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Federated Indians of Graton Rancheria

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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I chose this article as I was curious to see what information was provided on the federally recognized group of my tribe (Coast Miwok), especially since I know it has an interesting history. It's a comparatively small tribe to others, which makes information to the public more limited. Through my own research through the archives (and research done on such), I know how little and difficult information there can be, and I also know that much information comes through oral-tellings, which I know Wikipedia wouldn't view as an adequate source. Based on all of this, reviewing this article is critical as someone with built-in knowledge on it to see what information is there, missing, new, false, etc. Immediately upon opening the article, I saw it's in need of citations/sources and thought it all the more important to evaluate.


Evaluate the article

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This article is well-organized for the amount of content it contains, but ultimately there is rather sparring content - split into just 4 sections. In both the "early history" and "recent history", there are multiple sentences that have been edited by others to need a citation, often on more generalized statements that can't be directly supported. In looking through the page's history, the most recent edit was made in September of 2024, with a focus more so on page look than content. While there have been continuous edits over time on this article, most have been minor in recent times, changing headings, altering/elaborating names, etc. without adding any new information to the past, present, or future of the tribe. The talk page had a few interesting discussions, mainly from 2007 but also going through 2010 - otherwise it's been rather silent. The talk page dove into addressing biases and opinions on the tribes validity, values, etc. when it was of the time of building casino operations; now, as time has settled and more programming has developed, less arguments are apparent and the article is written far more neutrally. The biggest need for this article at this moment, in order to move it past "start" mode and up in importance, is verify the claims in the article that need sources to support them. At this time, a lot of the claims may not have Wikipedia-approved sources to supprt them, in which they may need to be removed until they can be properly supported or other improved statements are made in replacement.