User:Sean.dempsey1231/Evaluate an Article
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Complete your article evaluation below. Here are the key aspects to consider: Lead sectionA good lead section defines the topic and provides a concise overview. A reader who just wants to identify the topic can read the first sentence. A reader who wants a very brief overview of the most important things about it can read the first paragraph. A reader who wants a quick overview can read the whole lead section.
ContentA good Wikipedia article should cover all the important aspects of a topic, without putting too much weight on one part while neglecting another.
Tone and BalanceWikipedia articles should be written from a neutral point of view; if there are substantial differences of interpretation or controversies among published, reliable sources, those views should be described as fairly as possible.
Sources and ReferencesA Wikipedia article should be based on the best sources available for the topic at hand. When possible, this means academic and peer-reviewed publications or scholarly books.
Organization and writing qualityThe writing should be clear and professional, the content should be organized sensibly into sections.
Images and Media
Talk page discussionThe article's talk page — and any discussions among other Wikipedia editors that have been taking place there — can be a useful window into the state of an article, and might help you focus on important aspects that you didn't think of.
Overall impressions
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved. |
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[edit]Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
[edit]I wanted to evaluate this article because I am an NBA fan and remember this occasion about Josh Giddey coming out. There was a lot of confusion of what the charges were and what would happen to him.
Evaluate the article
[edit]The lead section of this article has an introductory sentence and dives right into what happened with NBA player Josh Giddey with accusations of him hooking up with an underage girl. The lead is relatively concise and touches over a lot of the important details. In this article there is plenty of information that is missing like the name of the girl, where it occurred, and the steps taken by the NBA and the Thunder after the social media post was posted. I would like to see more specific information that is up to date and you can find a more detailed description of Josh and the case on other websites. Then article is written in a neutral tone, because this a topic that many people wouldn't be "biased" on. There are sources cited in this piece that back up with is written in the article.There are much better sources that could be used from larger news outlets and media organizations. The article is well written, and there aren't many images besides the one at the top of the page. Overall it gives a brief overview of Giddy as a player and that something happened to him with an underage girl. However, I wish more details were given about the steps taken after the pictures and videos circulated the internet.