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Dress History

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Dress history

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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I have chosen this article to evaluate because it interests me. My first impression of the article is that it's very short and I feel more could be added to it, or linked out of it.


Evaluate the article

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The lead section is very concise.

The content could be organized with more culturally specific subheadings. The only examples listed seem to be focused on European dresses rather than global types of dresses. I believe the content could stand to be more up to date. No modern history of dresses is addressed, the photos are of dresses or textiles from the 19th century or earlier.

The tone and balance is all neutral.

There seems to be adequate sourcing for the article. If more information is added for global or modern dressed, more sources will be necessary.

The article could be improved with more information on the history of dresses. Photos of the evolution of dresses over time would be a nice addition.