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Good things about the article:

  • Keep up with current information like the movies and tv shows he was involved in, in 2022.  
  • Gave a good overview of his work and addressed the roles he was known for.  
  • Listed the awards he won and was nominated for
  • Adding a year, he started acting
  • What he did before he became an actor  
  • neutral tone/ good viewpoint
  • had a good description in the beginning
  • article is easy to read and well written

Needs:

- more information

- maybe another image

  • Not everything seems relevant but there are things that can be added.
  • costars they should have added Shailey woods and miles teller since they are big names in the industry
  • getting married to his wife they should have added the date he was married
  • name and gender of this child.
  • name of his sibling and the ages  
  • better transitions between paragraphs
  • few links did not work

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