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Which article are you evaluating?

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LinkedIn article.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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I have chosen this article because it's the selected article for practice. LinkedIn is important because it's a business focused social media compared to others like Facebook. Overall the article looks ok.

Evaluate the article

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The lead section is good and the introduction sentence about what LinkedIn is. The lead doesn't really include brief description about the major sections that follow it, rather it talks about the companies background. The content itself looks ok and looks relevant, it includes information about LinkedIn from the past as well as new sources. The tone of the article seems to be neutral and unbiased. It seems to just present the facts about the company instead of including personal views. The organization may need some improvement as the article includes many different subsections. The images included in the article support the topic at hand but may benefit from being moved into a different position. Overall it looks ok but could benefit from moving information and sections around, combining topics, and moving the photos around.