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Which article are you evaluating?

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ATP-binding cassette transporter

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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I chose this article because I found our discussion of ABC transporters to be extremely interesting in class. They're extremely important for a lot of reasons, but their involvement in many diseases- such as cytic fibrosis and cancer- make ABC transporters very important to humans. My preliminary impression of the article was that it was extensive in covering information related to ABC transporters.

Evaluate the article

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(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The lead section includes a clear and concise introductory sentence. It briefly mentions the aspects of ABC transporters that will be covered in the rest of the article and while it is detailed, I wouldn't say it's overly detailed. The content appears up to date, backed by sources, and thorough. It was well structured and had no glaring grammatical errors. The article is written from a neutral standpoint and doesn't contain any obvious biases. Most of the talk page is from years ago, with only minor complaints that have been fixed since. Overall, I would say this page is well written and looks great-- the images are clear and help in conveying information and the material is concise and comprehensive. If I had to give a criticism, I would say just to explain the images with a bit more detail-- i.e., purpose of the transporters shown. Otherwise, there is nothing I would critique, the article is well developed.