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Which article are you evaluating?

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(Baroque)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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(Baroque is an art style that I find very interesting, that's why I chose it.)


Evaluate the article

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(The article seems a little opiniated. Per example, the part "even more flamboyant " of this passage subjects that baroque and it's derivatives are amazing styles : "it had evolved into an even more flamboyant style, called rocaille or Rococo". You might want to stay more neutral and decrease your use of connotative words. Also when you say: "But a general feature is that everywhere the starting point is the ornamental elements introduced by the Renaissance", you should include the sources that back your claim instead of using everywhere. And to finish, in your lead, you didn't say which topics of baroque you would cover.~~~~)