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Which article are you evaluating?

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Insects in literature - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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I chose this article because insects are misunderstood in terms of importance both in literature and the real world. Additionally, entomology has become an intriguing area of study for me in the past year or so.

Evaluate the article

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The lead has some effective parts, but it is very brief and to the point, i.e. listing positive and negative qualities. The lead sentence should more effectively convey the noteworthiness of these qualities. In addition, the lead sentence uses terms like "generally" which can get confusing and take away the overall message the writer wants to portray. The content of this article is very good, but likely could be improved with more information about how these qualities came about. The literature should also be reviewed for more recent findings, due to the possibility of the meaning of these qualities changing with time (and individual perspective). The tone of this article could be improved by less harsh labeling. The word "as" or "is" is problematic on an impressionable mind, as it limits the brain into thinking other characteristics or meanings can not be associated with whatever is in question. Sources appear to be completely cited, and attributions (such as workable links) are present. The article has a solid organizational structure, but playing around with placements of sections could be beneficial. Perhaps covering the negative qualities first would help with balance, as the comparison to positive is so significant. Or maybe go more in depth with the positive qualities (add more if possible)? There are a handful of images incorporated within this article. They enhance the overall appeal, resembling a very non-fictional but time appropriate design and appear to be properly captioned. The introduction line on the talk page is a very good descriptor for the main concept of this article. It may be beneficial to add. The idea of this article really suits a growing mind, like my own. The inclusion of so many literature pieces and symbolized qualities in insects is really engaging. It also implies that there could be so many more out there that have yet to be assigned. This is certainly a foundation {in terms knowledge} that could easily be built upon with more up to date understandings.