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Which article are you evaluating?

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Laura Huenneke

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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I chose to evaluate this article because Dr. Huenneke is a well known ecologist for her cancer prevention and invasive species research in Native American communities.


Evaluate the article

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Evaluate an article

Complete your article evaluation below. Here are the key aspects to consider:

Lead section

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A good lead section defines the topic and provides a concise overview. A reader who just wants to identify the topic can read the first sentence. A reader who wants a very brief overview of the most important things about it can read the first paragraph. A reader who wants a quick overview can read the whole lead section.

  • Does the lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
    • Yes
  • Does the lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
    • No
  • Does the lead include information that is not present in the article? (It shouldn't.)
    • No
  • Is the lead concise or is it overly detailed?
    • Very concise

Content

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A good Wikipedia article should cover all the important aspects of a topic, without putting too much weight on one part while neglecting another.

  • Is the article's content relevant to the topic?
    • Content is seriously lacking. Good lead but lack of supporting content
  • Is the content up-to-date?
    • Yes, but could be much more detailed
  • Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
    • Yes, there is a lot of content missing
  • Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?
    • Yes, the article states that Dr. Huenneke is well known for her research in Native American communities.

Tone and Balance

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Wikipedia articles should be written from a neutral point of view; if there are substantial differences of interpretation or controversies among published, reliable sources, those views should be described as fairly as possible.

  • Is the article neutral?
    • Yes
  • Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
    • No
  • Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
    • No
  • Are minority or fringe viewpoints accurately described as such?
    • No
  • Does the article attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
    • No

Sources and References

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A Wikipedia article should be based on the best sources available for the topic at hand. When possible, this means academic and peer-reviewed publications or scholarly books.

  • Are all facts in the article backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
    • Yes
  • Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
    • Yes
  • Are the sources current?
    • Yes
  • Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
    • No
  • Are there better sources available, such as peer-reviewed articles in place of news coverage or random websites? (You may need to do some digging to answer this.)
    • Yes
  • Check a few links. Do they work?
    • Yes, the links work

Organization and writing quality

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The writing should be clear and professional, the the content should be organized sensibly into sections.

  • Is the article well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
    • Yes
  • Does the article have any grammatical or spelling errors?
    • No
  • Is the article well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
    • No

Images and Media

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  • Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
    • No
  • Are images well-captioned?
    • N/A
  • Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
    • N/A
  • Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
    • N/A

Talk page discussion

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The article's talk page — and any discussions among other Wikipedia editors that have been taking place there — can be a useful window into the state of an article, and might help you focus on important aspects that you didn't think of.

  • What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic?
    • The only conversations going on behind the scenes are about the spelling of Dr. Huenneke's last name.
  • How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects?
    • No rating given because article is a stub. No.
  • How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class?
    • Wikipedia is much more concise and gives more of a general overview than the way we talk about cancer and related topics in class.

Overall impressions

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  • What is the article's overall status?
    • Article is a stub. It is very incomplete and could be filled in with supporting content.
  • What are the article's strengths?
    • Strong lead sentence
  • How can the article be improved?
    • Organization, add explanation of Research and Bibliography / Early Life
  • How would you assess the article's completeness - i.e. Is the article well-developed? Is it underdeveloped or poorly developed?
    • Article is very underdeveloped - it is currently a stub

Examples of good feedback

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A good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.