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Which article are you evaluating?

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Developmental psychology

I am going to evaluate the article on Developmental Psychology.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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I have chosen to evaluate this article because I am in the field of psychology and this really interested me and I wanted to go into child psychology.


Evaluate the article

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  1. Lead Section: The lead effectively defines developmental psychology and psychology in general but it definitely could be a bit better using the outline of an article's structure. Some citations would also improve credibility.
  2. Content: The article covers key theories, like Piaget, Ericson, Vygotsky, but it lacks modern research depth on neurodevelopment and cross cultural studies. Some more depth and research into those topics would benefit the people reading the article
  3. Tone and Balance: The article does stay neutral, however, it favors the classic theories rather than more modern and contemporary research.
  4. Sources and References: Most of the sources and references are academic, but some statements lack citations and others rely on older sources. A broader range of perspectives would improve the article
  5. Organization and Writing Quality: The article is very well structured. I think that there could be an improvement on clarity for general readers.
  6. Images and Media: the images that are used in the article are relevant. I think there should be more visual aids like pictures, or infographics on research methods.
  7. Talk Page Discussion: Discussions focus on improving coverage and reducing any bias.
  8. Overall Impressions: I thought the article was well structured, incredibly informative, and stayed neutral. The article also covered many major theories effectively. Some areas that could improve are that there needs to be more recent research included, more citations, and better coverage of underrepresented groups.