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Which article are you evaluating?

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Nursing theory

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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As someone who wishes to be a nurse, I was intrigued by the theory and wanted to learn more. Now I am evaluating the article to see how accurate it is and what can I do to elevate it.


Evaluate the article

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The article's introduction is really good but can be improved by making it clearer by giving a summary of the major sections in the article so readers know what to expect. The content is pretty up to date but some more recent theories or theorists from different backgrounds can be added. The article does a good job of staying neutral and not promoting one theory over another. However, more theorists are Western. To give more representation, theorists from other parts of the world could be added as well. Most sources used seem reliable but maybe more recent sources can be implemented as well. The article is also very organized with its sections, has clear writing, and no grammar errors. However, some sections could be more detailed. The article could add diagrams or other visual aids to help the reader better understand the theories. I'm not seeing many talk page discussions I assume because the page doesn't get that many updates or input. Overall, the article is very developed, it can just benefit from a few things.