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Article title: Radio Recombination Lines
Article Evaluation: This article does not exist! There are tons of papers written about this, with many observations of them. This is an important piece of Astronomy that is missing on Wikipedia and would be beneficial to include.
Sources: Radio Recombination Lines - M.A. Gordon , R.L. Sorochenko ^[1]:Cosmological Observations of RRL ^[2]:

Article title: Lyman-alpha blob
Article Evaluation: This article has mostly older citations, and nearly every citation comes at the end of the article where the blobs are simply listed out. The remaining information about the blobs are drawn from 2 articles, reducing the breadth of content. This article can be improved with additional citations, creating a well-rounded and complete article.
Sources: Dynamics of blobs ^[3]:Blobs in Simulations ^[4]:

Article title: Giant Void
Article Evaluation: This article is not written using neutral language, including statements like "Inside this vast void" and "the WMAP cold spot is dwarfed by this void." Along with this, there are very few citations and the existing ones are old.
Sources: Would need help finding sources for this, as "Giant Void" is not easy to track down!

^ Gordon, Sorochenko, M.A., R.L. (2009). Radio Recombination Lines: Their Physics and Astronomical Applications. ISBN 978-0-387-09604-9.{{cite book}}: CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (link)
^ Emig, K. L.; Salas, P.; Gasperin, F. de; Oonk, J. B. R.; Toribio, M. C.; Röttgering, H. J. A.; Tielens, A. G. G. M. (2019-02-01). "The first detection of radio recombination lines at cosmological distances". Astronomy & Astrophysics. 622: A7. doi:10.1051/0004-6361/201834052. ISSN 0004-6361.
^ Smith, Aaron (2020-07). "Dynamics of Lyman-α blobs". Nature Astronomy. 4 (7): 648–649. doi:10.1038/s41550-020-1075-6. ISSN 2397-3366. {{cite journal}}: Check date values in: |date= (help)
^ Kimock, Benjamin; Narayanan, Desika; Smith, Aaron; Ma, Xiangcheng; Feldmann, Robert; Anglés-Alcázar, Daniel; Bromm, Volker; Davé, Romeel; Geach, James E.; Hopkins, Philip; Keres̆, Dus̆an (2021-03). "The Origin and Evolution of Lyα Blobs in Cosmological Galaxy Formation Simulations". The Astrophysical Journal. 909 (2): 119. doi:10.3847/1538-4357/abbe89. ISSN 0004-637X. {{cite journal}}: Check date values in: |date= (help)CS1 maint: unflagged free DOI (link)