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Which article are you evaluating?

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National Snow and Ice Data Center

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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I chose this page because I literally did not know what else to choose so I just scrolled and clicked.

Evaluate the article

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(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)


The lead section is very clear and concise, the overarching goal of the article is made clear within the first few sentences. I found the second part of the lead section to be wordy and contain some information that, while could be useful to know, was never expanded on/felt out of place in the lead section. Perhaps move that part down to the history section.

It seems like the article was last updated in 2009, that's where all the data stops. There seems to be a lot of information missing as well, it's very vague concerning international interactions and the actual relevancy.

Tone is neutral, sources are diverse and work

2 posts on the talk page. Expected though, as it's a relatively niche and small article.

I think it's a good start, but it's fairly underdeveloped and could use updating.