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Which article are you evaluating?

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Casa Batlló

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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I chose this article because I had the privilege of visiting Casa Batllo a couple of times and it has become one of my favourite buildings to walk into. I was also curious on whether or not the information i learned from tour guides at Casa Batllo was comparable to the information found on Wikipedia. This article matters because Casa Batllo is a world-renowned building that is very popularly spoken about and visited therefore its representation on a site like Wikipedia is very important. My primary impression of it was that it included pertinent images to help the reader get a sense of its beauty and it was divided in many sections that facilitated the reading experience.

Evaluate the article

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The lead includes an introductory sentence that easily sets up the topic to the reader without adding too much detail which remains true throughout the entirety of the lead. It contains brief descriptions of the content that is later divided into sections with further detail. I do however think, that more detail and content could have been added throughout the text as it only gives a basic understanding of the topic. For instance, I would have also included the Gaudi alphabet and how it is present on all the doors of the house and I would suggest to go into more detail on how the house is currently be used for and the activities that it offers. The content is mostly up to date and neutral however, on one instance, the writer speculated on the cause of a broken bulb even if it is not a proven fact. Other than that, it has no spelling or grammar mistakes and is organized in a way that is easy to read and comprehend. It is all divided into different and clear sections with subsections when needed. I thoroughly enjoyed how each room had its own subsection and image which helps the reader get a more detailed and clear understanding of the interior of the space without ever having to visiting it. In fact, images were very well implemented in the article such as the gallery section which further allowed the reader to feel immersed in the space. The sources were mostly from reliable and diverse sources and the links do work and are up to date. Finally, the conversations on the talk page have a lot to do with is formatting and appearance rather than its content. It was rated a Star class. In conclusion, I felt as though this article was strong and well presented ,however, I would have liked to see more content as I felt there's was some missing in places and it could have been more neutral like I mentioned earlier.