User:Chriscui0823/sandbox
Here is where I take personal notes for everything I have done in Wikipedia.
Articles Editing History
[edit]Goals
- Improve the structure of the article
- Find more secondary literatures to cite
- Update information not accurate or controversy
- Add new information
Editing Notes
072721 - 1st small group session
- Found references (secondary):
- In the WHO Model Formulary for Children 2010[1], grey baby syndrome is listed under chloramphenicol as a rare adverse effect. It simply lists symptoms of the syndrome but has no other useful information such as pathophysiological explanations or therapeutics guidelines.
- There is a review published on Mayo Clinic Proceedings[2] briefly summarizing the adverse effects. Other than symptoms, there is a short description about dosing and risk age groups.
- In the Drug and Lactation Database (LactMed)[3], it states that "Milk concentrations are not sufficient to induce gray baby syndrome" since the syndrome is dose-related.
072921 - 2nd small group session
- Tried to find more references but failed.
- Scanned through what we have already in the article.
- A bit confused on what to add and how to phrase.
073021 - 3rd small group session
- Started editing officially.
- Included what I have above in the article.
- Updated the infobox.
- Didn't know what to add more since I have added all I have.
- Have added 4 references and ~2500 characters.
- Added the MSD Manual[4] as an entry recommending the proper use of the medication in neonates.
- 2 references and ~2000 characters to go.
- Have added 4 references and ~2500 characters.
080121 - extra small group session
- Read through each sections.
- Re-discover materials in the citations and add more flesh to the article.
- Found 1 more reference about the enzyme function development.
- This review[5] summarized the physiological development of hepatic function in neonates, which highly related to the possible toxicity of medications.
080221 - Editing during lecture
- Found last reference requested.
- In this review[6], common therapeutic regimen of chloramphenicol is provided comparing to the toxicity cut-off.
- Need more to be built on. Now hitting ~4000 characters.
080321 - 4th small group session
- Took comments of peer review from another group.
- Changed phrasing in different sections to be more accurate.
- Added more links within Wikipedia for terms not well explained in the article.
- Fixed minor grammar errors.
080421 - 5th small group session
- Fixed the formatting of references
- Checked if references are from potential predatory publishers
- beallslist.net
- Prepared the final presentation
080521 - self editing
- Final proof check before the presentation
080221 - During lecture
- Peer review assigned.
080321 - 4th small group session
- Completed 3-question of peer review in the Talk page.
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- ^ WHO model formulary for children 2010. World Health Organization. Geneva, Switzerland: World Health Organization. 2010. ISBN 978-92-4-159932-0. OCLC 653091253.
{{cite book}}: CS1 maint: others (link) - ^ Kasten, M. J. (1999). "Clindamycin, metronidazole, and chloramphenicol". Mayo Clinic Proceedings. 74 (8): 825–833. doi:10.4065/74.8.825. ISSN 0025-6196. PMID 10473362.
- ^ "Chloramphenicol", Drugs and Lactation Database (LactMed), Bethesda (MD): National Library of Medicine (US), 2006, PMID 30000554, retrieved 2021-08-02
- ^ Werth, Brian J. (2020). "Chloramphenicol". MSD Manual Professional Edition. Retrieved 2021-08-02.
{{cite web}}: CS1 maint: url-status (link) - ^ Grijalva, James; Vakili, Khashayar (2013). "Neonatal liver physiology". Seminars in Pediatric Surgery. 22 (4): 185–189. doi:10.1053/j.sempedsurg.2013.10.006.
- ^ Hammett-Stabler, Catherine A; Johns, Thomas (1998). "Laboratory guidelines for monitoring of antimicrobial drugs". Clinical Chemistry. 44 (5): 1129–1140. doi:10.1093/clinchem/44.5.1129. ISSN 0009-9147.