User:Cc3339/Evaluate an Article
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Complete your article evaluation below. Here are the key aspects to consider: Lead sectionA good lead section defines the topic and provides a concise overview. A reader who just wants to identify the topic can read the first sentence. A reader who wants a very brief overview of the most important things about it can read the first paragraph. A reader who wants a quick overview can read the whole lead section.
ContentA good Wikipedia article should cover all the important aspects of a topic, without putting too much weight on one part while neglecting another.
Tone and BalanceWikipedia articles should be written from a neutral point of view; if there are substantial differences of interpretation or controversies among published, reliable sources, those views should be described as fairly as possible.
Sources and ReferencesA Wikipedia article should be based on the best sources available for the topic at hand. When possible, this means academic and peer-reviewed publications or scholarly books.
Organization and writing qualityThe writing should be clear and professional, the content should be organized sensibly into sections.
Images and Media
Talk page discussionThe article's talk page — and any discussions among other Wikipedia editors that have been taking place there — can be a useful window into the state of an article, and might help you focus on important aspects that you didn't think of.
Overall impressions
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[edit]Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
[edit]This article was chosen mainly for class, also Dura Europos is an important religious site and contemporary archeological and geopolitical field that calls for further documentation.
Evaluate the article
[edit](Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)
Lead:
-Good intro sentence.
-First paragraph feels very crammed with information and hard to digest initially.
-The following paragraphs are easier to understand, less name dropping.
Content:
-Foundation: All info cited, one clarification needed, relevant anecdotes.
-Rebuilding: Weird use of 'perfected' during Parthian period, not many citations in first paragraph. Not enough citation in following paragraphs as well.
-Siege: Also few citations, perhaps due to lack of research? -After: Interesting references to academic disagreement. -Inhabitants: Lacking citations in 2nd para, ambiguous final sentence 'texts must date'.
-Cults: Also lacking citations, thorough survey, though. Relatively lots of focus on religious sites.
-Archeology: Maybe could use more info
-Modern: Personally, I'm curious about the ISIS looting and wish there was more info on that. This category seems to be lacking.
-Maybe the shields under 'Archeological Finds' could use its own page, perhaps use of materials.
This article seems more or less unbiased.
I feel that the images could be more comprehensive.
Otherwise this seems solid.