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Which article are you evaluating?

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Dura-Europos

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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This article was chosen mainly for class, also Dura Europos is an important religious site and contemporary archeological and geopolitical field that calls for further documentation.


Evaluate the article

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(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

Lead:

-Good intro sentence.

-First paragraph feels very crammed with information and hard to digest initially.

-The following paragraphs are easier to understand, less name dropping.

Content:

-Foundation: All info cited, one clarification needed, relevant anecdotes.

-Rebuilding: Weird use of 'perfected' during Parthian period, not many citations in first paragraph. Not enough citation in following paragraphs as well.

-Siege: Also few citations, perhaps due to lack of research? -After: Interesting references to academic disagreement. -Inhabitants: Lacking citations in 2nd para, ambiguous final sentence 'texts must date'.

-Cults: Also lacking citations, thorough survey, though. Relatively lots of focus on religious sites.

-Archeology: Maybe could use more info

-Modern: Personally, I'm curious about the ISIS looting and wish there was more info on that. This category seems to be lacking.

-Maybe the shields under 'Archeological Finds' could use its own page, perhaps use of materials.

This article seems more or less unbiased.

I feel that the images could be more comprehensive.

Otherwise this seems solid.