User:Cavery210/Evaluate an Article

Evaluate an article

Complete your article evaluation below. Here are the key aspects to consider:

Lead section

A good lead section defines the topic and provides a concise overview. A reader who just wants to identify the topic can read the first sentence. A reader who wants a very brief overview of the most important things about it can read the first paragraph. A reader who wants a quick overview can read the whole lead section.

Does the lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
Does the lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
Does the lead include information that is not present in the article? (It shouldn't.)
Is the lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content

A good Wikipedia article should cover all the important aspects of a topic, without putting too much weight on one part while neglecting another.

Is the article's content relevant to the topic?
Is the content up-to-date?
Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?

Tone and Balance

Wikipedia articles should be written from a neutral point of view; if there are substantial differences of interpretation or controversies among published, reliable sources, those views should be described as fairly as possible.

Is the article neutral?
Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
Are minority or fringe viewpoints accurately described as such?
Does the article attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Sources and References

A Wikipedia article should be based on the best sources available for the topic at hand. When possible, this means academic and peer-reviewed publications or scholarly books.

Are all facts in the article backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
Are the sources current?
Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
Are there better sources available, such as peer-reviewed articles in place of news coverage or random websites? (You may need to do some digging to answer this.)
Check a few links. Do they work?

Organization and writing quality

The writing should be clear and professional, the content should be organized sensibly into sections.

Is the article well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
Does the article have any grammatical or spelling errors?
Is the article well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Images and Media

Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
Are images well-captioned?
Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

Talk page discussion

The article's talk page — and any discussions among other Wikipedia editors that have been taking place there — can be a useful window into the state of an article, and might help you focus on important aspects that you didn't think of.

What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic?
How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects?
How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class?

Overall impressions

What is the article's overall status?
What are the article's strengths?
How can the article be improved?
How would you assess the article's completeness - i.e. Is the article well-developed? Is it underdeveloped or poorly developed?

Examples of good feedback

A good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.

Peer review of this article about a famous painting

Which article are you evaluating?

List of Kinnikuman characters

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

I'm a longtime fanboy of this manga/anime series. Watched a fansub of the first few episodes on YouTube one day in 2012 and was instantly hooked. Read the manga when the fansubs ended. I've been working on fansubbed versions of the anime since around 2020 or so with Saiko no Fansub, polishing their subs so that they sound natural in English and catching any mistakes in translation and grammar.

Evaluate the article

There are inconsistencies with the terminology used. "Choujin" is more commonly used within the pages such as List of Kinnikuman characters, but "Chojin" is also used. Most fansubs (both our subs and Hokuto no Gun's subtitles) and the FANDOM Kinnikuman wiki exclusively spell this term as "Chojin", as the mangaka, Yudetamago consistently spells the word with no "u". (It's still better than Toriyama's World, the first major scanlator of the Kinnikuman manga, who used "Chyo-jin".) In addition, Seigi Chojin and Justice Chojin are used interchangeably and the plural for Chojin is canonically "Chojin", with no S.
The recasted voice actors of the cast in the Perfect Origin Arc TV anime are missing.
The sections on the Ultimate Chojin and Goku'aku Chojin (Heinous Chojin in our fansubs) is lacking in detail. This makes sense, as no one in the English speaking fandom knew anything about the details of the plots, since they were filler arcs not in the original manga, until recently when we fansubbed those two arcs.
In addition, there is no information on the cast's exploits during the Ultimate Tag Tournament Arc of Nisei.
The Choshin and Time Chojin section is blank likely because that arc hasn't been fan translated into English yet.
Jack Chi's name is translated as "Jack Faucet". The character's name "Jak Chi" is a pun based on the Japanese word for 'faucet' "jaguchi" and should be spelled as Jack Chi to preserve the pun.
The Manriki's name is translated as "The Vice". Most fan translations leave his name as "The Manriki".