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Introductory Section
[edit]- First sentence is good and cites a reputable source
- I think for the second sentence I would add Paleolithic African Archaeology when the stone tools are mentioned.
- I need to figure out how I am going to address the Oldowan and Lomekiwi question, espeically in the stone tool section of the article.
- I think I would put important site for the study of human evolution at the front. Where I mention ardi and homo erectus and their possible occupations of the site. I think it would be important to mention paleoanth
- Making it an important site for
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