User:Bubblemaster99/Evaluate an Article
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Complete your article evaluation below. Here are the key aspects to consider: Lead sectionA good lead section defines the topic and provides a concise overview. A reader who just wants to identify the topic can read the first sentence. A reader who wants a very brief overview of the most important things about it can read the first paragraph. A reader who wants a quick overview can read the whole lead section.
ContentA good Wikipedia article should cover all the important aspects of a topic, without putting too much weight on one part while neglecting another.
Tone and BalanceWikipedia articles should be written from a neutral point of view; if there are substantial differences of interpretation or controversies among published, reliable sources, those views should be described as fairly as possible.
Sources and ReferencesA Wikipedia article should be based on the best sources available for the topic at hand. When possible, this means academic and peer-reviewed publications or scholarly books.
Organization and writing qualityThe writing should be clear and professional, the content should be organized sensibly into sections.
Images and Media
Talk page discussionThe article's talk page — and any discussions among other Wikipedia editors that have been taking place there — can be a useful window into the state of an article, and might help you focus on important aspects that you didn't think of.
Overall impressions
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved. |
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[edit]Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
[edit]I chose this topic because this specific type of rash is extensively covered in medical school curriculums, as there are many different pathologies that present with purpura and it is important to distinguish between them. My first impression of this article is that it is sparse. It has the appropriate beginner information, but it can be enriched with more details.
Evaluate the article
[edit]Lead Section
- The lead section is concise and contains information pertinent to the topic. It could use a few more sentences so some details can be added to round out this section a little better.
Content
- The content is accurate, though there could be a lot more detail over the specific etiologies of thrombocytopenic purpura.
Tone and Balance
- The article is neutral and there are no obvious biases.
Sources and References
- The references are current (<5 years old) and all from reputable sources.
Overall Impressions
- Overall, this is a page that has not been extensively worked on and the article is underdeveloped.
- The information is medically correct and references are up-to-date and reputable.
- There is no conversation on the talk page.
- There are limited images.
- There is only very brief discussions of etiologies, diagnosis, and treatment.
- This page can be improved by more lengthy, detail-oriented discussions about the pathology, as well as adding more images.