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Which article are you evaluating?

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Thrombocytopenic purpura

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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I chose this topic because this specific type of rash is extensively covered in medical school curriculums, as there are many different pathologies that present with purpura and it is important to distinguish between them. My first impression of this article is that it is sparse. It has the appropriate beginner information, but it can be enriched with more details.

Evaluate the article

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Lead Section

  • The lead section is concise and contains information pertinent to the topic. It could use a few more sentences so some details can be added to round out this section a little better.

Content

  • The content is accurate, though there could be a lot more detail over the specific etiologies of thrombocytopenic purpura.

Tone and Balance

  • The article is neutral and there are no obvious biases.

Sources and References

  • The references are current (<5 years old) and all from reputable sources.

Overall Impressions

  • Overall, this is a page that has not been extensively worked on and the article is underdeveloped.
  • The information is medically correct and references are up-to-date and reputable.
  • There is no conversation on the talk page.
  • There are limited images.
  • There is only very brief discussions of etiologies, diagnosis, and treatment.
  • This page can be improved by more lengthy, detail-oriented discussions about the pathology, as well as adding more images.