User:Anne drew/sandbox

Review by section

In this section, I will give sentence-by-sentence feedback on the article. Issues that must be resolved to avoid a failed review are marked with the fail symbol () and the corresponding good article criterion number that was violated.

Lead

Excerpt	Criteria status	Review comment

Overall review

Once I have finished my review by section, I will summarize my feedback below. Once the feedback is addressed, you can ping me to take another look.

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.

   a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail: