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In the Introduction paragraph, I noticed several pieces of language that could be edited to reflect a more neutral stance on endocrine disrupters. For example, using words like "derailed" and "actually harm humans" could be reworded. Many of the sources seem to be from the 1990's, and may be dated as a result. In addition to the other types of endocrine disruptors, I would like to add an additional example: Triclosan (used in anti-bacterial soaps and Colgate Total toothpaste). This may be even more of interest following the outbreak of COVID-19, where anti-bacterial soap use grew exponentially. 05:14, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
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